Deathly Hallows: Initial Reactions

by Travis Prinzi on July 22, 2007

cover.jpgSPOILER ALERT!

Where does one begin a post like this? There’s so much to say in response to Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, I’m not even sure what issue to tackle first.

Let’s start simple: I loved the book. There are a few disappointments, perhaps, but on the whole, it’s a tremendous novel, and it finishes this epic series powerfully. Simply put, Rowling has succeeded in writing the fairy tale-myth of our time. She ended it well.

The Christian Content of Deathly Hallows

This is a good place to start, since this was the initial stated goal of this weblog. Let’s say it plainly: The debate is over. Rowling so clearly told the Christian story in Deathly Hallows that one wonders how anyone will ever protest the series again. (They will, of course. It’ll just be all the more ludicrous). Lev Grossman has got to be kicking himself.

This book was not only filled with Christian imagery and themes, but with Scripture itself: Jesus Christ and St. Paul got quoted directly.

On the grave of Kendra and Ariana Dumbledore, we read the words of Jesus from the sermon on the mount: Where your treasure is, there will your heart be also (Matthew 6:21). On the grave of the Potters, the words of St. Paul: The last enemy that shall be destroyed is death (1 Corinthians 15:26). We even get Hermione’s exegesis of the text after Harry thinks it sounds a little bit too much like something a Death Eater would say:

“It doesn’t mean defeating death in the way the Death Eaters mean it, Harry…. It means…you know…living beyond death. Living after death.” (p. 328)

Then, of course, Harry “dies” and comes back from the dead, in a much more than figurative sense (though not necessarily completely and finally). And where is he in that “afterlife” period of time with Dumbledore? At King’s Cross. Can’t get anymore obvious than that, can it? Harry is murdered by Voldemort, without so much as raising a wand in protest; he let himself die at the hands of evil men on behalf of the Wizarding World, spent a short time at King’s Cross, and then came back from the dead to defeat evil.

The effects of Harry’s death and resurrection parallel Jesus’ almost perfectly. In Jesus’ death, the power and evil and Satan are vanquished, and Satan is “disarmed” (Colossians 2:15). In Harry’s death, the same thing happens: Voldemort’s powers against the Wizarding World fail, because Harry died on their behalf:

“I’ve done what my mother did. They’re protected from you. Haven’t you noticed how none of the spells you put on them are binding? You can’t torture them. You can’t touch them. You don’t learn from your mistakes, Riddle, do you?” (p. 738)

Someone here at SoG said his would happen ages ago; I can’t remember who or when. The only point he/she missed was Harry’s resurrection. Whoever you are, if you’re reading this, show yourself! You are to be congratulated.

Oh, there’s more we could say: The cross that Harry draws on the tree next to Moody’s buried eye, the Sword of Gryffindor lying in the pool (with the clear Arthurian reference, Ron ["king"] getting the sword out of the water!), which Harry at first thinks is a “silver cross,” and more. But this is supposed to be the short review, so let’s move on.

It’s All About the Trio

One thing Rowling did quite clearly in this was remind us all of one important thing: This series is about Harry, Ron, and Hermione. I’m quite certain that coming into this, most of us thought this book would be primarily about Snape, and I was convinced Hagrid would have a much bigger role. I was also quite convinced that something would happen that would cause the trio to be back in school for the year; I really didn’t think she planned to break her structure. She did! And in doing so, she effectively removed us from Severus Snape and any other plot-stealer for the majority of the books. Sure, it felt like they were in tents for a very, very long time. But we’re experiencing this with Harry, and that whole portion of the book needed to happen for one key reasons: to build the plot surrounding Dumbledore.

The Dumbledore Plot

I couldn’t be more pleased with this book for the simple reason that Dumbledore was so prominent, and Rowling did a magnificent job with his backstory. I didn’t think we’d get his backstory. But now we know why Dumbledore is so keen to forgive, don’t we? Jesus said that the one who is forgiven much loves much. Later tonight, I will start my analysis with a lengthy post on Dumbledore (I know, suprise, right?), so I’ll not say more here.

Severus Snape

I began speculating in PubCast #20 that, due to the nature of the series – its popularity and the vast amount of analysis and speculation over the 10-year period – that Rowling would not be able to pull off the Snape surprise. For those of us in the HP world who have been analyzing the whole thing since Half-Blood Prince, it turns out I was correct. I was talking about Snape being in love with Lily just a couple days after I read Book 6. By the beginning of August, the Snape-loved-Lily and Stoppered-Death theories were already out, and those two theories comprise the big surprise Rowling was going for with Chapter 33: The Prince’s Tale.

I’m certain plenty of Fandom was surprised, of course. But anyone who’s been following Cathy Liesner’s “Stoppered Death” theory and the subsequent speculations by John Granger, Janet Batchler, and Felicity saw this coming a mile away (2 years away, to be precise).

Here’s a prediction: Big time Snape fans are going to be terribly unhappy with this book. We barely got to see the greasy git, and his death just suddenly happened. They’re going to feel robbed.

I don’t, though. I thought it was well-done.

House-Elves

So, my Ollivander theory didn’t come true, but the house-elves did fight! I’m not sure why they used kitchen knives instead of their own magic, though. Perhaps Dobby only learned how because of his desire to be free?

I love the way Rowling did this, especially as it relates to Kreacher’s development – or should I say, Harry’s development in his attitude toward Kreacher (and other oppressed magical brethren). I didn’t think Rowling would make us end up liking Kreacher; this might have been the best surprise of the book!

The Deaths

Dobby’s and Fred’s were absolutely gut-wrenching. I cried at the death of Hedwig and the deaths of Lupin and Tonks. But when Dobby and Fred died, I shut the book and walked away. I had to pull myself together. Moody’s death didn’t particularly strike me, but that was the one that had most obviously, and without a doubt, been spoiled for me.

Unanswered Questions

There are going to be a lot of complaints about unanswered questions. I’ll start with one: What’s on Draco’s left forearm? There was a lot of time spent on this in Book 6, and it was not answered. I’m guessing the Dark Mark. Anything else, and she would have worked it into a surprise. Draco almost entirely disappeared in this book. More analysis later.

How about this one: What did Harry’s parents do for a living? I figured we’d get that one answered.

I suspect there’s also going to be complaints about Harry’s use to two Unforgivable Curses. My response? I said this a long time ago: It all depends on who’s doing the “forgiving” and “not forgiving.” They’re “unforgivable” by the Ministry.

But even if we call them “Dark Magic,” I think it’s fair enough to say that Harry is still a flawed human being; he’s been so since the beginning, and he always will be. Just like the rest of us.

I’ll leave it at that for now and write more analysis later. Bath time for Sophia!

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1 BoggartNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 7:51 pm

Who was it that used magic late in life?
was that unanswered

2 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 7:59 pm

Excellent things happen throughout the book.

It’s taken me a while to sort it out. I’m becomming more satisfied with the book.

The unforgivable curses thing… Harry and MacGonnagal both use “unforgivable” curses. It shows that there’s situations where hard things are called for. It really shows that it is difficult to know what to do- what is right and what is easy is exteremely confusing at times. That’s a good lesson for readers.

Matthew

3 colorless.blue.ideasNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:24 pm

Very nice analysis.

Alas, due to time constraints, I do not get to the HP websites often, so these may be dumb questions or comments.

Has anyone done any analysis of Hermione as somewhat representing Hagia Sophia — Holy Wisdom, a term for the Holy Spirit in some Christian traditions? It seems that she often has that role to play: if not Wisdom per se, then common sense often. Did I miss that?

No, not perfectly — but then Harry-as- Christ is far from perfect, either.

I think a main objection to this line of thought may be that such might force a Trinity allegory on Ron/Harry/Hermione. I don’t see that working well.

Second thought. I see that there’s been talk on the postmodern nature of J.K. Rowling’s writing. I’m not competent enough in the field of literary criticism to have a valid opinion on that. What I do see is some evidence —faint but there — of what Martin Luther would call /larva dei/: the masks of God, or often translated “the hidden God”. The basic idea is that God seldom operates directly and explicitly with His power. Instead, He operates through various means: people mainly. To me this appears to be a small factor.

I’m sure others will be much more capable or writing about other themes: Harry and Ron’s baptisms in the pool (with, of course, the analogy to the purifying washing of a candidate for knighthood), etc. There is just so much!

Thanks again for the post and your blog.

4 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:28 pm

I just added a few more paragraphs above.

5 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:37 pm

The Department of Mysteries also seemed to figure in many people’s speculations.

Nada.

The mysteries were revealed without it.

I was really moved when James, Lily, Sirius, Lupin came to Harry on his walk to the cross. Being surrounded by a cloud of witnesses?

Matthew

6 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:44 pm

Matthew, yes, I think that moment was the 5th time I cried. I’m a weenie, apparently.

Yeah, no DoM. You know, within a month or two after HBP, I had firmly settled on Stoppered Death, Snape-loved-Lily, Harry-as-horcrux AND an 7th horcrux, believe it or not. Too bad I didn’t stick firmly to the last two! I even argued that Dumbledore had good reason for not telling Harry until a later date.

Oh, well. Thankfully, it’s not about what predictions we got right and wrong!

7 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:48 pm

Did Hermione’s bag just seem a bit too much like Felix the cat’s magic bag. to me it seemed a bit of a cop out from Rowling. “How do I explain how Hermione had this needful object?…Oh yes, she packed it in the bag before she left the burrow…”

Am I alone on that?

Matthew

8 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:50 pm

Travis,
Are you a fan of the movie Fandango? Your weenie comment brought that back to me.

Matthew

9 ChristopherNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 8:55 pm

How did the Gryffindor sword get back in the sorting hat?

10 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:05 pm

Matthew, in response to comment #7, I didn’t have that particular thought about the bag, but I did have similar thoughts at points throughout the book. There were a few really “convenient” plot turns – how many times did the trio have something completely lucky come along to save them?

On the second question, no, never seen it.

Christopher, it got there the same way it did in CoS: A true, brave Gryffindor (Neville) pulled it out of the hat in a time of need.

11 shadowquillNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:11 pm

As soon as Harry whispered to the snitch I began sobbing, although to be quite honest, I think they were happy tears for the most part. Rowling has certainly hit us over the head. I’d been expecting just a tiny bit less subtley, but instead she basically ditched it! I was so happy at that. Right from the start we had George joking about feeling “saintlike” and “holey”. I knew it once that began: it wouldn’t stop. And it didn’t! :)

Anyone notice Harry’s borrowed wands both had wood that ended in “thorn”? ;) I believe the first that Ron fetched for him was “blackthorn” (please correct me if I’m wrong) and then Draco’s was “hawthorn”. Thorn.

I was seeing religious references all over the place, and I agree that Grossman will definitely be kicking himself. There is no way you can deny from where Rowling’s inspiration has come now.

Deathly Hallows is now my favorite work of fiction. I cried countless times, and (weirdly) enjoyed crying. To use a phrase my English teacher always did: it’s cathartic. It’s like a cleansing process.

Oh, and symbolism aside…I knew Snape had to be good as soon as Nigellus mentioned Ginny and her pals had been sentenced to detention with HAGRID by Snape. I don’t think Snape would have overlooked that special bond. He’s way too observant.

I’m just shocked that Voldemort allowed most of the staff to remain, including Hagrid. Favor for a new favorite DE?

12 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:17 pm

Was there an error?

Hermione says she did a memory charm on her parents then later said to Ron and Harry that she hadn’t done a memory charm, but knew the theory.

I didn’t really get the bit about the ring at the end where Harry asks Dumbledore’s opinion about retrieving it from the forest. Can anyone explain it to me? My wife is reading our copy and she’d growl if I snatched it back.

Matthew

13 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:22 pm

Matthew, I noticed that, too. I wondered if there was a difference between memory modification magic and memory erasing magic. Seems like the former would be easier than the latter, though. I’m sure Rowling will get that question soon enough.

There was another similar moment where I thought there was an error, but I can’t recall it now.

The deal with the ring, I think, was this: Harry was presently in the possession of two Hallows. To have the third would mean to face the temptation that both Voldemort and Dumbledore faced – immortality. And probably even more than that, it would mean the temptation to call his parents, Sirius, or Dumbledore any time he wanted. I think I’d have wanted to use it just once to call Snape back and thank him, but the temptation to hold onto it and misuse it would have been too great.

14 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:25 pm

Shadowquill,
I think Voldemort still had respect for Hogwarts and what the founders had set up. I think he believed in the house system, and valued the magical knowledge of the staff. The professors must’ve been purebloods and as long as they toed his line they’d be ok.

Matthew

15 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:29 pm

Yes, good points, Matthew.

Voldemort’s whole goal was Wizard rule over Muggles. I don’t think we wanted the powerful Hogwarts staff against him, because he did not want to lose wizards who were potentially an asset to his quest to overcome the Muggle world. He probably hoped, through Severus, to bring them into submission.

16 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:33 pm

Travis,
I thought that it was Dumbledore’s point that Harry was the better man as he was able to posess the hallows without the desire to use them for his own gain. Kind of like the puzzle Dumbledore put on the mirror of Erised.

The chiastic structure was extremely evident. It seemed a little laboured at times too. Like she felt she had to get x number of sililarities in there.

That’d be a good topic to look at in a post, Travis.

Matthew

17 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:36 pm

Well, yes, and no…Dumbledore did want Harry to stay away from that Mirror for that very reason. And he did mention a few times in DH that he was trying to prevent Harry from facing the same temptations.

What made Harry a “better man” was that he did not yet have a desire for those things. I don’t think he’s beyond the realm of temptation.

Yes, the chiastic structure. My favorite parallel was when Hermione said to Ron, “Are you a wizard or what?” :-)

18 BHT MatthewNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:39 pm

Sweet, I can bury it in the middle of what’s sure to be over 100 comments :-)

I was wrong about Snape. There, I said it.

However, Rowling didn’t have to go and rub my nose in it by having the Potters give Snape’s name to Albus. Low blow.

19 BHT MatthewNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:53 pm

PS – I read pretty fast on my first time through so I can’t remember the answer to this question if there is one: What happened to Umbridge after the locket was taken?

20 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 9:56 pm

BHT Matthew, we never returned to that subject, so we don’t know.

21 MichaelNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:01 pm

Okay Travis. I to thoroughly enjoyed this book. LOVED IT! I don’t have much time as of now BUT with the DoM… I think it was suppose to be left unanswered. THAT was the point. Witches and Wizards were trying to find out the mysteries of death and life, of space, time, etc for centuries. And I think again, (Not sure if this is a Christian message, or more of a theme) but Harry didn’t find those out. If wizards and witches centuries before him couldn’t do it, why would Harry have? He couldn’t. Those things we saw in the DoM are part of God’s wonders, his creation .We only find out what happens in death once me die… and that probably goes for the mysteries of time and space and all the other wonderful things hidden in the department. And again the same could be said for the power of love. It’s such a powerful beautiful force… who would want to figure it out? It’s God’s gift to us humans. That very same gift saved Harry when he was one. That very same gift gave him the courage and strength to die for the wizarding world.

Just my two cents on that subject.

22 Paul DatoNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:03 pm

I am no literary expert and this is my first post, but I thought I noted parallels with Tolkien’s Lord of the Ring e.g., personality changes, especially in Ron when he wore the Horcurx locket, and also,as noted in #13 above when Travis mentions leaving the “ring” in the forest, otherwise it would be too much a temptation. A nod to another Christian writer?

Paul

23 BoggartNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:03 pm

Hey guys who was the person who used magic late in life?!
Ive been skimming through and i cant find a single mention.

Plz help

24 MichaelNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:04 pm

Oh and it also shows us that even with magic, these wonderful creations are still a mystery to wizards. Again I think that was Jo’s way of telling us… that perhaps we shouldn’t have to find out these answers. They are the true magic that surrounds us every day?

25 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:05 pm

Paul, yes, I did find the locket’s effect on Ron to be eerily similar to the One Ring.

26 DougNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:08 pm

Good initial points Travis, although I liked the book less than you seem to have done. I was indeed a big Snape fan, and as you predict above, I was very unsatisfied with how she handled that plotline.

On the other hand, I thought that the “Deconstructing Dumbledore” plotline was well-conceived and well-executed. For me, the conversation with Aberforth was among the high points in the novel.

I’ll confess that I think she sacrificed this plotline a bit with Harry’s resurrection. I mean, Albus basically did what Aberforth (and Snape) accused him of – he knew that Harry would have to die to defeat Voldemort, but withheld that unpleasant bit of information from Harry. Albus gets off the hook only because Harry cheats the Killing Curse a second time.

One other negative note for me was that I was VERY disturbed by the Unforgivable Curses. OK, it was certainly foreshadowed that Harry was going to use them. But there was no reaction or consequences or reflection about actually crossing that line. And then for Minerva McGonagall to casually cast one? That’s literally Unforgivable!

27 Kambria McLeanNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:11 pm

For me, the biggest unanswered question was internal: What was going on in King’s Cross with the flayed baby? I get much of the potential symbolism here, but what/who *was* it?

28 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:13 pm

Doug, I don’t think she sacrificed the plotline, because Aberforth was wrong. He was right to be mad at Albus for what he done as a teenager, but Albus had long, long since changed.

What Albus knew that Aberforth didn’t was that it’s better to die fighting Voldemort than to live having not opposed him. Death is not the worst thing that can happen to a person, and Harry knew it, too. Aberforth, on the other hand, just wanted to give up, told Harry to run away.

I knew we’d get to this point, but the response is easy: Dumbledore didn’t withhold that information from Harry. He planned, all along, to give it to him – it just had to be at the right time.

And especially when Albus learned of the blood transfer. Once he had that bit of information, he knew full well that whenever and however Harry died, Harry would be able to return to finish the job.

29 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:17 pm

Kambria: I think the little suffering creature was Voldemort’s “hell,” what he would become after he died. One page 741, Harry challenges Voldemort to try some remorse, and he says, “I’ve seen what you’ll become otherwise.” I think he was referring to that little suffering thing in King’s Cross.

30 Kambria McLeanNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:19 pm

Travis,
That makes tremendous sense, particularly in light of Dumbledore’s repetition to Harry that he (Harry) can’t help the baby. Thanks!

31 BoggartNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:22 pm

I didn’t like the book that much actually.

I can see where Travis is coming from, but It still disturbs me how Dumbledore’s mentality was so blaze towards Harrys life.
There was never a certainty that Harry was as skilled as he was. Harry couldve easily died doing a fools errand that only led to his death.

32 Paul DatoNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:29 pm

Travis,
I personally do not see a major problem with the “good guys” use of an Unforgivable Curse. They limited their use to the Imperius, and as far as I can recollect, Avada Kedavra (murder) nor Cruciatus (torture) were not used. Please correct me if I am wrong. There is such a thing as just war and at times requires the judicious use of techniques that during any other time would be unforgivable.

33 ChristinaNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:29 pm

So glad this post is finally up. I got the book and midnight and read it through in 4 1/2 hours. So I have been positively itching to get here and discuss!

I cried like a baby when Snape told Harry to look at him before he died…so he could see Lily’s eyes as he passed. I cried even harder, though, when Harry came back from death and spoke to LV as clearly as Jesus spoke to Satan. You can’t touch them now. I paid the price. Those who doubted before will not have a leg to stand on.

I knew there would be deaths, but I had no idea that JKR would allow both Tonks and Lupin to die after they had just had a child. And does anyone know who raised him after they died? Harry was the Godfather but they only mention Teddy visiting the Potters in the last chapter.

I am not sure if this is what you were looking for, Travis, but I will “show myself”, as you requested, in hopes that this is the post you are thinking of…here is my post form the “Is Harry a Horcux?” blog…

From post #289…”Harry will realize that his scar is a Horcrux and allow himself to be sacrificed to save the world from LV. Just like Lily sacrificed herself to save Harry. And with that love comes the magical protection it releases…so will Harry have to really die? I don’t think so. I think that the love that spared his life from the start will sustain him when he has to remove the Horcrux from himself to save everyone else.” The funny thing is I made that prediction a year to the day of the book release. Spooky! :)

I wasn’t right about a lot of things, but I am the most happy that this was right-on, not for my own glory in making a good prediction, but for everyone who hoped that Harry would survive.

34 BoggartNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:37 pm

Paul Dato,

actually Harry and Mcgonnagal used the cruciastus curse at least once. I totally agree with you though about how circumstances change.

35 BenNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:38 pm

Wow,comments are coming in like crazy,I read this post not long ago, and there were only a few comments.

Paul, I agree with you, it didn’t bother me to see good guys using the unforgivable curses. Also, I could be completely wrong, but I think at some point, a good guy used cruciatus.

Christina, 4.5 hours? Wow, that is fast, I finished about an hour and a half ago.

Ben

36 Chip BennettNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:46 pm

Travis,

Re: #27 – my take is similar to yours, though I think more that it was a glimpse of what was left of Tom Riddle’s soul: utterly beyond help, and pitiable. I think it was Harry’s pity for the thing that enabled him to face Voldemort in the manner in which he did in the Great Hall (even asking him to seek some remorse in whatever was left of his shattered soul).

A lot of people seem to be questioning the Sword of Gryffindor; I don’t have a problem with it. The Sword proved that Gryffindor – not the goblins who forged it – was indeed the rightful owner, and responded to the will of its owner in coming to the aid of Neville, just as it had done so with Harry.

37 DougNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:47 pm

Travis said…: What Albus knew that Aberforth didn’t was that it’s better to die fighting Voldemort than to live having not opposed him. Death is not the worst thing that can happen to a person, and Harry knew it, too. Aberforth, on the other hand, just wanted to give up, told Harry to run away.

All that may be true, but the charge against Albus, both as a teenager and as an adult, was not that he was a bad person. It was that he was tempted by power, and was far too willing to use others to further “the greater good”.

Harry would have consented, had he known the truth – he really was willing to die to defeat Voldemort. But Albus never bothered to tell him the truth in any of their heart-to-heart chats. Instead that was left as yet one more unpleasant task on Snape’s plate, to be done only at the last possible moment.

38 BenNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:47 pm

Btw, I got spoiled around midnight at the bookstore; I did what Travis said he was doing, and I turned up the volume if my iPod high enough where I couldn’t hear anyone. Unfortunately, there was a group of people there with spoilers written on their shirts. And, the sad thing is, my Dad, my brother, nor myself had spoiled up to that point.

Ben

39 LizNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 10:55 pm

I hated it.

I had the feeling that she originally wrote a different ending where Snape’s sacrifice was more noble and Harry died. Perhaps her editors pressured her to re-write it. Then she had to write the epilogue because she had told everyone it would end definitively and there would be no more.

I thought Snape’s death was a throwaway. And it was creepy when he asked to look in Harry’s eyes when he was dying (presumably because they were “just like Lily” – eeww). The only part that was emotional for me was when Harry was walking to his “death” and his parents were by his side. I think this is the chapter she said she wrote at the beginning. (Definitely NOT the epilogue!)

I assumed Mad Eye would be alive, or at least his body be found. No resolution (other than the eye). I assumed that if she’s going to kill major characters like Lupin and Tonks that she’d at least give them a scene to die in. Nope. I assumed Harry would have to face the Weasleys again after the death of their son. Nope again. She dodged all the emotional bullets.

Plus, why did Snape even go to Voldemort? If he really was a good guy and so smart and things were coming to a head, why just go meeky to the slaughter? Geez…Hermione had more tricks up her sleeve than Snape did.

Ron and Hermione disappear for two critical chapters, reappear with the basilisk teeth…and then they’re never used (except on the cup, and we don’t see that)? What was that about? And the tiara (oops, sorry, diadem – forgot this isn’t Disney) gets destroyed by Crabbe, the worst magician of his class? Pretty weak magic for a Horcrux!!!

Neville…the confusion over the Chosen One of the prophecy…why set that all up and not pay it off? So Neville cuts the head off the snake. Big deal. That’s why he’s in the prophecy for seven books? What about HIS need for revenge and Bellatrix? While it might have been cute to have Molly take the last swipe, it was Neville’s place to do it.

And yes, I AM p**ed that Harry gets to rip off goblins and throw Unforgivable Curses and just walk away. But then, I guess everyone walks away at the end in this book, even the Malfoys. No real Nuremberg in this one.

Harry and Ginny just smile and look on as the next cycle of Malfoy bullying comes into being in the epilogue. How wonderful.

Come on, Travis. Tell me why this is all wrong as you always do. Bottom line to me is…if you’re going to use Christ mythology, then you gotta put someone on the cross. Otherwise, Voldemort’s taunt about everyone else sacrificing for Harry is true. Willingness to perform an act of sacrifice is NOT the same as sacrifice. You just can’t be Aslan and Luke Skywalker all in the same chapter.

40 tassesNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:01 pm

Excellent review !!!

41 BoggartNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:03 pm

I LOVE YOU LIZ!!!!!

you said everything that crossed my mind!

The whole novel just seemed like a fanfic or smt

42 M TNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:07 pm

Loved the book. It was like a roller coaster ride. There were so many good things about it that I was willing to overlook the overly convenient plot developments (the worst one was when the three wizards and the two goblins just happened to come near the tent and the Trio overheard that the Sword of Gryffindor in the Gringotts Vault was a fake).

I loved seeing several theories we had read here and on other sites play out, especially when there was a twist that was not quite expected (example – Kreacher, Regulus, and the locket horcrux).

I too was surprised that we didn’t end up back in the Department of Mysteries, especially with the veil, but I’m glad Rowling did it the way she did.

There were several things I would have liked to see handled differently, but it would have taken a lot more than 759 pages to do it. Dobby is a good example. It felt right that he gave his life saving Harry (and the whole burial scene and gravestone were fitting tributes), but it was all just too quick.

I too didn’t like the “good guys” using the unforgiveable curses, especially when Harry again manages to defeat Voldemort using Expelliarmus, of all things.

Loved it when Neville came out of the tunnel as the leader of the DA resistance, and again when he pulled the Sword out of the Sorting Hat.

Overall, a very satisfying end to the series.

43 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:20 pm

Liz, there’s really no need to spend a lot time “telling you why this is all wrong.” You clearly have your own ideas about how it should have ended, and they are different from Rowling’s. I very much prefer Rowling’s to yours.

But of course I can’t resist responding to at least a few comments. But I’d like to ask this, first: you’re obviously quite mad – can we try to keep the tone of the discussion calm? Thanks.

Ok, here goes:

I think this was Rowling’s ending. No way she wrote an ending and let editors talk her into something different. Not happening.

Seeing as lots of people have confessed to having shed lots of tears during the reading of this book, I have a hard time with the criticism, “She dodged all the emotional bullets.” Yes, Lupin and Tonks were sudden. But she’s done the sudden death before. And I think Mad-Eye’s resolution was quite horrifying: he was found by the Ministry, and Umbridge stole the eye.

“Why did Snape go to Voldemort?” What reason would he have not to? If he had NOT gone to Voldemort, not obeyed his orders to come to him, wouldn’t Voldemort have been suspicious? It wasn’t time for Snape to blow his cover yet. He couldn’t have possibly risked disobeying a Voldemort order at that point. And clearly Snape wouldn’t have had any reason at that point to think he was in danger of being killed.

Confusion about the prophecy? What confusion? Neville wasn’t the subject of the Prophecy. That got cleared up two books ago. But I honestly can’t believe that you can say, “He got to cut the head off the snake. Big deal.” It was the last horcrux. The last barrier between Voldemort and death. He pulled the sword from the hat just as Harry did in Book 2. It was a truly heroic moment. When I read it, I said, “Yes. Neville finally had his day.”

Harry didn’t rip off goblins. Do you remember Bill’s explanation of the ownership issue? Goblins think paying for something is renting it. Even if it is theft (I don’t think it is), I have no qualms about terribly flawed people being heroes. Are you a big Snape fan? It gets really interesting to watch people argue for the greatness of Snape and then blast Harry over every flaw.

But here’s the point that’s most interesting to me:

Bottom line to me is…if you’re going to use Christ mythology, then you gotta put someone on the cross.

No, you don’t. It’s literature. The point is to get at the theme of it all, not retell the story exactly. There have been tons of Christ figures throughout history who didn’t “die on a cross” (or a stone table, or whatever). And Harry most certainly suffered – not in that moment, but he clearly suffered throughout this series.

Otherwise, Voldemort’s taunt about everyone else sacrificing for Harry is true. Willingness to perform an act of sacrifice is NOT the same as sacrifice.

So Harry’s at fault somehow because he was willing to be sacrifice, “died,” but was saved by love?

44 cigar95No Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:28 pm

I would love to hear more “epilogue”, but leaving us to use our imaginations is OK as well. Perhaps someday Rowling will write a 50 page “expanded epilogue”. (And doesn’t it seem like a no-brainer for her to someday release “Hogwarts, A History”? I know she’s said no more HP saga, but filling in the backstory doesn’t break that promise.)

One point that she gave us that *does* appear unresolved – what is the relationship between Draco and the trio now? was that glance in King’s Cross merely one of non-hostile acknowledgment ? Or in general – has the Slytherin/Gryffindor divide been healed?

I’m also curious about Neville’s teaching post – sure, Herbology is the obvious option, but wouldn’t DADA be an interesting possibility for the newly-confident, newly-revealed Heir of Gryffindor?

45 LeslieNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:37 pm

I definitely thought that it lived up to the hype. It has happened so often to me that I have started a book or series that has a great premise and keeps me turning the pages but then falls flat at the end. I personally think that the willingness to die means as much, at least as long as you believe that you really are going to die, which Harry did. The “resurrection” worked for me because of the fact that Harry had to finish the job, as it were.

I was bothered by the use of the Cruciatus curse but not so much the Imperius curse, mainly because I really couldn’t see any other way for them to do what they needed to do. Of course, “for the greater good” is obviously not something that JKR approves of in the normal course of things.

Hey, Travis – I’m in Buffalo and I groaned out loud when you said on one of your earlier podcasts that you’d gotten HBP in Wegmans, because I was really worried that you’d given away my secret for making getting the books short and sweet. Luckily, however, the one I went to was about the only one in the area NOT having special events (probably because there’s a Barnes & Noble right down the street), so I was home by 12:30. Of course, you may not have that many listeners in this area yet, although I have told people that I think you have one of the best podcasts out there.

P.S. You’re right – you do NOT have an accent. My sister went to college in NYC and they said that had a “network” accent, which basically means none.

46 Carla LuteNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:39 pm

The “good guys” using unforgivables bothered me..particularly crucio so often…and I think it always will. Flawed is one thing, but they’re still supposed to be good guys.

Working with kids as much as I do, I was a bit disturbed by some of the moments in the book. I thought Nagini coming out of Bathilda’s neck was a bit much… it could have been done another way. And yeah, I know J.K. isn’t writing for a particular age group, but the editor should have nixed it. I’m really hoping after this libraries and bookstores will move Potter to the Young Adult section. It’s really intended for preteens and up, not young children.

It’s war, and war is violent, understood. The final battle was handled very well for the most part. I’m glad we didn’t have to watch Tonks and Remus die. It was bad enough seeing their bodies.

I believe J.K. said in an interview that James was indepently wealthy, so Petunia was right saying that he “didn’t work”. I think he focused on fighting Voldemort/raising Harry after leaving school.

I’m coming to look at the book as “fuzzy allegory”. There’s not a direct parallel, but a cycling of certain very important Christian themes, particularly the power of sacraficial love. I thought about Lewis’s idea of being “Little Christ’s” from Mere Christianity.

I’m giving the book a B+. There are things that I believe should have been tightened up, there needed to be some sort of post battle report on the wizarding world, the epilogue was rather thin…

But I’m not giving up on an Auror Training Trilogy. Maybe that’ll sate me.

47 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 22, 2007 at 11:57 pm

Carla, my wife was quite rattled by the Bathilda/Nagini thing, too, and said the same thing about children’s lit. I’m glad no editor nixed it, though. I’m not sure it’s that much more horrifying than a lake full of re-animated dead people, after all.

All: I’ll get to the Dumbledore essay tomorrow. I’m sleep-deprived! Check out HogPro if you get a chance, as Mr. Granger has started a series of discussion points.

48 BoggartNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:36 am

Ok the book for me was preety bad, but ill leave you all to your opinions ;)

Unresolved plot points
1.What did Draco have on his arm?
2.Who used magic late in life?
3.What happened to S.P.E.W (just because Dobby died won’t change the whole wizarding worlds mentality)
4.I thought the weasleys flying car would appear
5.Why does Dumbledore have a scar shaped like the London underground
6.Rowling had said that the shape of Harrys scar was important, what happened?
7.Why was it that Sirius had to die?Rowling said we would know.

I might have missed some things or be completely mistaken about others if so plz tell me

There are probably many more but thats all i can thnk of.

Anyone else?

49 MaggieNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:39 am

Can anyone help me out in understanding the cover art (US edition). I just finished the book – head still spinning – but I cannot for the life of me figure out where they are!?

50 BoggartNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:46 am

they are in the Great hall at Hogwarts at the moment when harry disarmed Voldemort.

Harry is reaching to catch the wand while Voldemort is flying back-dead.

51 ReyhanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:57 am

To those who felt queasy because of Nagini and Bathilda: think how glad John Granger will feel that his prediction of a decapitation came true. For myself, I could have lived without it. But she’s the author. If she wanted a decap, a decap she got.

On a different note, I would like to be the first to say that I think JKR has out-allegoried C.S. Lewis. Harry’s walk in the forest, accompanied by James, Lily, Sirius and Lupin was incredibly moving (one of two places I cried). For me, it left Aslan’s walk in the woods with Susan and Lucy in the shade. It had none of the heavy-handedness because it felt completely natural that the people he had loved best would walk him to his death. It also perfectly resolved the dilemma (along with the King’s Cross chapter) about how close Harry would get to the dead without actually dying. He did not cross the veil – the ones on the other side came to him.

I loved – totally loved – the King’s Cross chapter. I had publicly doubted that JKR would be able to pull of a beyond the veil scenario. And she did it perfectly. So perfectly that I could see it – and hear it – as I read. And yes she does believe in hell, and yes, she does believe that some people are beyond redemption. I had hoped that Voldemort might be redeemed after death. But obviously, she’s made of sterner stuff.

Snape didn’t get a chance to say and do much, but he had done it all before, hadn’t he? And so much was exactly as we’d thought – the love for Lily, the breach due to his affiliation with the DEs, the bargaining with Voldemort for her life, and his resolve to keep Harry safe because of his love for his mother. That one word “Always” spoke volumes. However, even here JKR surprised us: aside from one commenter who wondered if Snape and Lily were in some way related, I don’t think any of us guessed that he had loved her for almost all of his life.

I was profoundly relieved at the deaths, because I had truly expected Ron or Hermione to take a bullet for Harry or the cause. Dobby’s death made me cry – not so much his death, actually, as Harry’s reaction to it. But it was absolutely a necessary death, to give Harry a wake-up call: better to stop people from dying than find a stone that’ll bring back the dead. Also, of course, Kreacher had stepped very neatly into the role of cute CGI side-kick. Fred was doomed from the moment George lost his ear – we knew that there were way too many Weasleys for 100% survival rate, and one member of a pair of twins is almost an invitation to a cull. Tonks has never emerged as a real person for me, so no loss there. And Lupin – well I would have missed Lupin had he died at the end of PoA. But his role since has been very minimal.

I did catch one mistake. When Alastor Moody’s curse challenges Lupin when he enters 12 Grimauld Place, Lupin responds: “I did not kill you Albus”.

And to all those of you who predicted that Harry was an accidental Horcrux: well done.

52 MaggieNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:57 am

Hm. It doesnt look like that to me. They seem to be in a circular place, that seems to be outside at sunset (true the the great hall’s ceiling looks like the sky outside, but there aren’t any walls on the cover… the great hall has walls doesnt it). And there are all of those people watching, but they all are wearing hoods, like death eaters. By the time Harry and LV face off in the Great Hall, the battle has turned and most of the death eaters have been killed or run off. On the cover it looks like ALL death eaters.

53 KelleyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:59 am

I really, really enjoyed the book and was amazed at the very obvious Christian themes and quotes. Dumbledore’s plan did not bother me. It is kind of like he knew the “magic deeper still” of the deathly hallows and knew that they would protect Harry. Would it have benefited Harry to know he was the Horcrux sooner? I think not. He might have ended his life too early and in the wrong way without destroying the other horcruxes first with the “power the Dark Lord knows not.”

54 Snno1No Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:43 am

All in all a disappointing and boring book. Yes, there were some good parts but the weakest by far of the seven books.

55 LauraHNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:56 am

Is it possible that a)JKR dropped some bogus hints in her interviews to throw people off the trail? or b)some things ended up on the cutting room floor? I join the other commenter who could NOT find where someone did magic late in life. And the shape of Harry’s scar being significant…well, was it?

Here are some things I found particularly satisfying:
1)Dudley’s turnabout
2)Kreacher’s redemption
3)not an exact quote, but roughly…on why DD gave the Deluminator to Ron
Ron: “He knew I’d run out on you.”
Harry: “No, he knew you’d want to come back.”
(that part made me cry!)
4)Luna’s all-around usefulness and resourcefulness
5)Neville turning out to be magnificent in the Battle of Hogwarts
6)Regulus turning out to have been a good guy
7)Snape not having been unmitigatedly horrible all his life
8)ditto for Petunia
9)Draco turning out less horrible than he was looking
10)the redemption of Percy (I actually woke up my husband by cheering when Percy came crashing in at the last minute!)
11)the unification of all houses in the battle
12)getting to read the word “snogging” one more time in literature :-)

I did have one more question, besides the late-in-life deal. When Harry said that the true master of the Elder Wand would’ve been Draco, because he had taken DD’s wand from him against his will….when did that happen? I’m not remembering it from HBP.

Great job, Travis! Keep it coming!

Laura

56 MichaelNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 3:07 am

I have more to say about everything but I do hope that she didn’t tell us those things to put us off on trail.

But now that I look at it, the more I think that she was right in not taking us to the veil or the DoM. Those are mysteries even MAGIC can not solve. It’s the beauty of God’s creation. I think the absence of the veil and the DoM spoke more volumes about the mysteries within it, than had we saw it and found about it all…

57 MichaelNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 3:10 am

For those who don’t like the book. Jo did say that many wouldn’t. A word of note, the plot of the entire books works very well. It was the things she promised us largely in interviews that were not followed through. They had no real set up in the story itself.

I am actually far more surprised more did didn’t like it. The response is almost overwhelmingly positive (with some criticism as a side dish, but not everything is perfect.) I actually expected this one to be the most loved/hated book of the series. It’s far from that… Each person has their opinion of the books… but wow, I’m astounded at how many people really loved this one.

58 FelicityNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 5:09 am

Where to start? I didn’t love it completely when I finished reading (12-hours through the night with bathroom breaks and coffee refills) but I loved great deal of it and was frustrated with a lot of it.

Predictions? Well, I was right about Nagini being a Horcrux, and it turns out that it wasn’t Harry or Nagini but both! My brilliant deductive work in locating the Hufflepuff cup was insane as it turns out, and the Ravenclaw diadem was the tiara in the RoR only it had nothing to do with Fortescue or Great Auntie Muriel. My Invisibility Cloak theory was rubbish. The green potion apparently showed Dumbledore his own guilt over his sister’s death (although I do think the orphans’ experience fits better and still holds up). Snape did use an AK against Dumbledore on the Tower, but I’m rethinking Stoppered Death unless the potion that stoppers death is the one that contained the curse in Dumbledore’s hand (not quite the same as a macabre existence as a member of the walking dead). I do hope someone asks Rowling what the golden potion was.

I agree completely with Travis about the wonderful Christian references and ending (and good catch to the poster who noticed the thorns in Harry’s two replacement wands!), and I found the Harrycrux explanation tolerable even though I loathed the idea that Lily’s magical protection wasn’t able to prevent Harry from becoming the “wickedest of magical inventions.” At least it wasn’t a Scarcrux.

The most touching moment for me was when Harry whispered to the snitch that he was about to die. And I agree with the poster above that Rowling handled the King’s Cross scene superbly; I wouldn’t have found a physical trip behind the actual Veil and back convincing after being told there was no returning. And wonderful insight from the poster above that the mysteries in the DoM are really mysteries and needed to stay that way (as a Catholic, I should have seen that for myself!). I was convinced that Voldemort would be vanquished in the Department of Mysteries via the Love Room or Veil or both, but I really loved the way Harry walked into the forest to meet Voldemort, ready to give his life to save everyone else.

Dumbledore’s humanizing backstory really filled him out as a complex character although I am still stunned by his almost pathological secrecy and need to hold vital information back. Would it have killed him to give Harry the Horcrux books after the big talk about how Harry had to track down and destroy the remaining four (which was the meeting before the Cave meeting)? I thought surely Dumbledore would leave Harry word by some manner explaining how he destroyed the ring. As it was, Harry wouldn’t have known about the students’ attempted theft of the sword and the fake sword sent to Gringott’s if not for the timely arrival of Griphook telling his story within earshot of the trio (prompting Hermione to get the sword information from Phineas, who happened to be in the room when Dumbledore cracked the ring), all of which prompted Harry to look for a Horcrux in the LeStrange vault. And in another wonderful coincidence, the trio were later apprehended and taken with Griphook to the Malfoys, etc.

Several times as I read through the book, I was mentally thinking of it as Harry Potter and the Incredible Coincidences. Could Rowling be playing with the idea of predestination? Or maybe it really is a fairy tale. It is one thing to overhear conversations in a castle you happened to live in, and it’s quite another to overhear critical information from wandering wizards and goblins when you’re changing campsites every night in randomly-chosen wooded areas.

I appreciated the Kreacher turnaround although I was a bit shocked that it only took a few compliments and Regulus’s locket considering all the time he spent going around the twist listening to Walburga’s portrait. Kreacher’s leading the castle elf cavalry could have used a bit of explanation (how did he know Harry was in a battle at Hogwarts since he hadn’t shown up on his own any other time Harry was in trouble?). And how did Kreacher survive drinking the green potion? Are elves impervious? I was touched that Regulus insisted on drinking the potion instead of Kreacher when they returned to the cave.

What did Dudley see during the OotP dementor attack?

Who is the character able to perform magic late in life?

What happened to the unity of the four houses? Does the last-minute (highly self-interested) assistance of Narcissa Malfoy constitute four-house unity or does the unity come post-battle when we see the civil nod between Draco et al. and Harry assures his son that he could be proud to be sorted into Slytherin?

In the July 2005 post-HBP Leaky/Mugglenet interview. Rowling said Grindelwald was dead! And I would have loved a sentence or two to explain how Dumbledore was able to beat Grindelwald in a duel when Grindelwald was using the Elder Wand.

Hermione’s memory charm on her parents was not convincing. It would have been better if she had convinced them to go into hiding under Order protection like the Dursleys. Having them just think they were another couple and promptly move to Australia was too much of a stretch and it irritated me early in the book. What did they do for money? What did they do about their dental practices? Surely they didn’t leave the minute Hermione cast the charm, so didn’t they notice that every bill, legal document, and bank statement in their home had the name Granger on it? Did Hermione forge false papers for them as well? BTW – Kingsley cast a memory modification on Marietta Edgecomb in OotP that made her forget about the DA; it was very different from the memory erasing spell Lockhart tried to use on Harry and Ron at the end of CoS.

Tonks and Lupin are obviously the couple in the alchemical wedding who die and leave an orphan behind, but it seemed very perfunctory (although I loved the baby with turquoise hair). I realize Rowling couldn’t describe every heroic death in detail, but still.

There were fifty bodies in the Great Hall, all of whom fought against Voldemort. I would have liked a chapter letting us know how the members of the DA, teachers, and other students fared. I would also have liked to know what happened to Umbridge and the Death Eaters. Surely one more chapter before the Epilogue wouldn’t have been a hardship.

We didn’t find out conclusively who was with Voldemort at Godric’s Hollow or how Dumbledore knew that Harry was alive after the attack (the missing 24 hours).

We didn’t find out if Snape truly did set up Emmaline Vance. And I know Rowling could have overshadowed Harry’s story by giving Snape more coverage, but damn, I really wanted to know more about his backstory. Even at age nine, he was hesitant to tell Lily that being a Muggleborn wouldn’t matter, and yet his witch mother married a Muggle, so did the Princes have a history of pureblood snobbery and Eileen was a black sheep or was Snape’s low regard for Muggles no more than a response to his father? And what exactly was going on in Snape’s head that he would carry such an enduring love for Muggleborn Lily while chumming around with Avery and Mulciber and seeming to want to join Voldemort even before his falling out with Lily? And I must say I expected an additional reason for Dumbledore’s trust in Snape than merely his unrequited love for Lily (I expected that but didn’t think it explained Dumbledore’s utter trust in Snape).

Also, Snape showed up when Voldemort called for him because he didn’t know he was in danger. It wasn’t until he was in the Shack that he noticed Nagini in a protective cage (the clue Dumbledore told him to look for), and that’s why he kept asking for permission to go after Harry (because it was time to tell Harry that he was a Horcrux). Which led to another instance of perfect timing since Harry was watching from a hiding place all along and Voldemort helpfully didn’t use an AK on Snape but let Nagini bite Snape before taking off, allowing Harry to reach Snape in time to get the critical memories.

And how is it that the Order members didn’t find it astonishing that Snape’s Patronus was a gentle, sweet-looking doe? And how is it that neither Lupin nor Sirius ever mentioned that Lily and Snape had been friends before Hogwarts and up to the end of their fifth year? They took walks together and a Gryffindor friend of Lily knew Snape was willing to sleep under the Fat Lady’s portrait because he wanted to speak to Lily? I feel a bit cheated that in six books, none of that came out.

John Granger got his beheading (Nagini)!

Dumbledore (PoA in Hagrid’s hut) and Mad-Eye’s magical eye (GoF when Harry was caught in the step after dropping the golden egg) were able to see through Harry’s Invisibility Cloak, so it’s not a perfect IC. Did I misunderstand or is this DH cloak supposed to hide the rightful owner in every situation?

What are the 12 uses of dragon’s blood? Weren’t they supposed to be important, which is why they weren’t included in one of the movies?

I loved Harry’s response to Dobby’s death and the little memorial to Dobby the free elf.

59 AlNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 6:03 am

I was wondering how closely the Deathly Hallows are supposed to be associated with the three temptations of Christ. That some connection exists seems clear enough to me. They would seem to promise a way for Harry to achieve his mission without the ‘cross’. However, could it be closer than that.

Following the account in Matthew 4, the Resurrection Stone corresponds with the first temptation (stones into bread). The temptation is that of restoring life in the wrong and unnatural manner (‘man shall not live by bread alone…’). Being driven purely by a hunger for holding onto life (both your own and those close to you) is wrong. Admittedly, this one is a bit of stretch. Perhaps someone has a better idea on this one.

The second temptation (Christ casting himself down from the temple, confident in his Father’s protection) is far more clearly related to the Invisibility Cloak. The Invisibility Cloak is the ‘father’s protection’. Just as Christ is tempted to presume on the protection of his father and avoid the suffering of the cross, so Harry could rely on the Cloak of his father’s and avoid his fate, even when his ‘hour’ has come (quite literally).

Jesus walked, as it were, invisible though many crowds seeking to kill him (Luke 4:30; John 7:30; 8:59; 10:39) and could have done so again. However, both Christ and Harry have to step out from under the protection of their fathers’ cloak and face evil alone.

The resurrection stone might also relate in some way to this temptation. The spirits of Harry’s friends and relations help him as he approaches death, playing a role similar to that of the angel in the Garden of Gethsemane prior to Christ’s death (Luke 22:43). Jesus could have had spirits to minister to him throughout his sufferings and could have appealed to a legion of angels to fight his battle with him (Matthew 26:53). However, he must fight the final battle alone. Harry is in a similar position, being ministered to by the spirits of friends and family as he approaches death, something that he has to be prepared to lose as he faces his enemy alone.

The Elder Wand corresponds to the final temptation (rule over the kingdoms of the world on condition of worshipping Satan). The Elder Wand gives the greatest power in the world to its owner, being the means by which the owner can rule over all others. Jesus is tempted to grasp at rule in the wrong way. However, he must undergo the self-sacrifice of the cross. Only then will Satan be disarmed and the rule be given to him as its rightful possessor. Much the same thing happens with Harry. He must resist chasing the wand before it is given to him as its rightful possessor following his self-sacrifice.

Harry, like Christ, is given three temptations to pursue a ‘crossless’ victory. However, as he takes the way of the ‘cross’ he becomes the rightful owner of all. The last enemy of Death is defeated, but not by means of the tools that Death himself offers.

Thoughts?

60 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 6:28 am

Al,
I think it’s an insightful post you’ve made. Viewing the Hallows as temptations away from his self-sacrifice is excellent.

That sits very well in my mind, I’m sure you’re right.

Matthew

61 AntonNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 7:33 am

To add another angle to this fantastic avalanche of thoughts and comments:

I am intrigued by the Bible references Travis noted. Matthew 6:21, “Where your treasure is, there will your heart be also.” Take a look at the surrounding Bible verses to see how fascinating it is in the light of Deathly Hallows. Serving two lords, the famous Our Father-prayer… And what about these verses directly after the quoted verse:
22″The eye is the lamp of the body. If your eyes are good, your whole body will be full of light. 23 But if your eyes are bad, your whole body will be full of darkness. If then the light within you is darkness, how great is that darkness!”

Have you noticed how the eyes keep returning in DH (and perhaps the other books too, I must check) whenever somebody dies? Mad-Eye’s magical eye pops up at Umbridge’s office and is burried afterwards by Harry. When Dobby dies, his eyes are described as empty orbs reflecting the starlight. Fred’s “eyes stared without seeing” when he died. And finally, when Snape dies there is one final moment of eye-contact between him and Harry before the light in his dark eyes fade away. (I guess that’s why it’s so important that Harry had his mother’s eye. Snape died staring in Lily’s eyes.)

62 Mrs. WeasleyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 7:37 am

I liked the book very much, for many of the reasons mentioned by you all above. I do have some questions too – the main one was mentioned by Felicity above: how did Dumbledore know what happened in Godric’s Hollow the night the Potters died? Apparently, there were no witnesses. And second to that, where was Baby Harry in the time between when his parents died and the time Hagrid delivered him to the Dursleys?

Another question – what happened to Luna? In the epilogue, we see five of the six friends, but no mention of Luna. Bummer.

Also, I would love to know what Harry does for a living, 19 years later, with no bad guys to fight. But I guess we’re just meant to wonder. Somehow, I don’t see him with a desk job in the Ministry of Magic :-) .

I have many of the same questions as Felicity, but I do think I have one answer for you too, Felicity – I think the House unity was that so many students of all the Houses (except for Slytherin) stayed behind to fight, and even more came in. Also, in the scene in the Great Hall after Voldemort’s death, it says that Professor McGonagall had conjured up the four House tables again, but no one sat by houses – teachers, students, parents, friends, all were interspersed.

Oh, and one last question – where has Sirius’ bike been all these years? (Obviously not important to the story, but inquiring minds want to know!)

63 MichaelNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 7:54 am

Did anyone notice that the questions that have all been left out are the ones that Jo has mentioned in her interviews? If we were to SOLEY read the books, and accept cannon for the way things were, then there would be few unanswered questions (other than what happened to everyone else, which I think Jo is leaving up to all of us.)

Weird how she did that… and she never said she’d lie… I’m guessing she has all of these answers… maybe they were edited out?

AND WOW! This just in from Mugglenet…

“In its first 24 hours on sale, Scholastic has announced that Deathly Hallows has sold 8.3 million copies in the United States. Half-Blood Prince had sold 6.9 million copies in its first day on sale back on July 16th, 2005.”

:D Awesome!

64 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:00 am

Mrs Weasley,

I’d say that Bathilda sent a message to Dumbledore on the night the Potters were killed and then looked after Harry. She just lived over the road!

I reckon Luna got together with Dean. They seemed to share something.

Harry is a conscientous parent and lives tax-free, courtesy of the reformed Ministry of Magic.

Sirius’ bike was under a tarp at Hagrids cottage.

Matthew

65 MichaelNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:06 am

And just as an update, it seems DH is getting VERY favorable with the general critics and fans alike.

http://www.metacritic.com/books/authors/rowlingjk/harrypotterandthedeathlyhallows

And on Amazon the book has 4.5 starts (out of 5.)

I can understand some won’t like the book. But that’s fine. I’ve noticed most people have issues with either the death and the epilogue but love/liked the overall plot. I don’t know why I need to keep reassuring myself of this. It’s a fantastic book. I do want to know more, but from the BOOKS have told us, Jo has answered most of her questions. It’s juts hide time she answers the ones she brought up in her previous interviews.

Some things the book DID bring up that I want clarifying… Why did RAB go and hunt the Horcruxes? I’m going with that it was the death of his father. Great pick up by Jodel there. Why did Harry so casually use the Cruciatus curse? I can understand the use of Imperio but not that one… though it could have been because he was on the tower that night and knew just how evil that DE really was.

Travis I loved the handling of the Snape plot. I know he wasn’t featured much in the book but as this is Harry’s journey, then that is acceptable. One thing that I did love… Snape being so good means that he has helped Harry as we saw in the Pensive, in more ways than Harry knew. So his presence in the other book really is now amplified. His death was so sudden. But I think people need to read this book, slower, once more and let everything sink in. More things come into fruition, etc.

66 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:06 am

Michael,

Those figures are amazing.

And to consider that each of those readers have had the gospel “smuggled” into their hearts/minds. What an accomplishment and what a ripe harvest!

Matthew

67 phwestNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:32 am

Liked it enough to read until dawn Saturday to finish it. Two particular thoughts – first, I think the basis for Dumbledore’s trust of Snape is found particularly in the resonance between Dumbledore and Snape’s lives – having experienced first hand the agony of allowing a dark wizard to destroy someone he loved Dumbledore is able to understand and validate that Snape’s grief and conversion is genuine. Also, I think Dumbledore is clearly setting Snape a penance in charging him with protecting Harry, and understands that the unresolved conflict with James will only drive the obligation deeper. In that context, I found Dumbledore’s aknowledgement of Snape’s courage (I sometimes feel we sort too early) is his absolution. There is also the wonderful contrast between the skeptical and demanding Dumbledore, who comes to trust Snape only after Snape truely proves his loyalty, and the “trusting” Voldemort, who as soon as Snape presents a tale that conforms with Voldemort’s own prejudices, accepts Snape’s story completely.

The other, more thematic thing, is the multitude of ways that Voldemort’s ignorance of love sets up his fall. Lily, Snape, Neville, Regulus (betraying Voldemort out of love for his house elf!?), Kreacher, even the Malfoys are all driven to make contributions to his defeat by their connections to others, connections that Voldemort may cruelly or cynically manipulate, but without any understanding of what it will drive them to do.

68 Mrs. WeasleyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:38 am

Matthew, thanks for the answers to my questions – and I loved your thoughts on Harry’s job and Sirius’ bike!

You may be right about Bathilda; that’s a good thought, her taking care of Harry, but what I want to know is how did Dumbledore know the sequence of events that happened? That James was killed first, and that Lily threw herself in front of Harry? For all he knew, it could have been James that threw himself in front of Harry, right? I really thought we’d find out something more about that night.

And, I have to say that I don’t think anyone in the world could have guessed what the Deathly Hallows really meant – that was yet another big surprise, masterfully pulled off. I’m glad to hear an explanation for that Invisibility Cloak – I’d always wondered why James had that, when they were so rare.

69 MichaelNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:46 am

I agree Mrs. Weasley. The Deathly Hallows plot was awesome. NO ONE could have guessed that. What I also liked was how she used that to really show the choices harry had to make. It wasn’t just a plot device, but a character device. Bravo Jo!

70 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 9:09 am

It’ll take me till much later today to get to all these excellent comments.

For now, I want to add a note of agreement to something Michael said: Most of the unanswered questions come from Rowling interviews, not the canon itself. Rowling’s going to be answering a lot of questions about those!

Many of the other questions are plot issues we thought needed to be answered, but most likely didn’t.

I’ll be back later today!

71 EeyoreNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 9:22 am

Wow, that took a long time to read through all the comments, but well worth it.

I loved the book. When I finished after more than 24 hours of nearly non-stop reading, I was exhausted but very satisfied, and emotionally drained. I had laughed, cried (alot) and been amazed–especially at Kreacher.

I loved seeing the obvious Christian imagery and references and direct quotes, all the alchemical imagery throughout, the King Arthur references, and little nods to other books that Rowling has said she read: the Silver Doe reminded me of “The Little White Horse”, Luna’s house made me think of “I Capture the Castle”, and of course, the baptism when Harry saw the sword in the pond was a combination of Arthurian legend and of Eustace going into the deep well in “Voyage of the Dawn Treader”. Even Harry’s reaction was similar.

I’ve put some of my thoughts on my blog, mostly relating to “The Prince’s Tale”, which was so well done. I think it will likely be my favorite chapter–or one of them. Finding out that Snape and Dumbledore did not make an Unbreakable Vow, but let their “Yes” be “Yes” and “No”, “No”, was just one more of the many Christian moments in the book–and perfectly explained why Dumbledore never further answered the question of why he so completely trusted Severus Snape. To tell Harry or anyone else more would have meant that Dumbledore hadn’t kept his promise to Snape to never tell.

Like some of you, I am still bothered that Harry used Cruciatus curse–the Imperius one I can understand, but torture? Mmmm, not so sure I’ll ever be comfortable with that one.

And Al, thanks for making that connection to the three temptations of Christ. I might have got there eventually, but I will definitely understand the Deathly Hallows in a richer way than I had so far.

And of course, it had to be old Bathilda who tipped off Dumbledore to what had happened to the Potters–why didn’t I think of that? Good catch, Matthew.

I was so pleased that many of the things that I had thought would happen, did, though they happened in a completely different way. On my blog I started with Snape as his loyalty to Dumbledore and determination to protect Harry was the one that seemed to be in jeopardy.

I thought when I was reading that the tiara from Auntie Muriel might be the Horcrux, but was pleased that it was the one in the Room of Requirement, which was the first one I noticed. And I’m OK with Harry being an accidental Horcrux. Especially the way Rowling wrote it, that even that torn portion of Voldemort’s soul wanted to cling to something living.

Predestination–I do think that she was going down that path with some of the coincidences. It’s my understanding that she is a member of the Church of Scotland, no? Which I am told is very similar to the Presbyterian church, of which I am a member, and yes, predestination is a biggy. My Methodist minister friend and I had that conversation over a year ago. He pointed out that the acceptance of predestination is one of the main differences between the Presbyterians and the Methodists. I’ve not really studied theology, so I’ll take his word for it.

However, a belief in predestination does not negate one’s ability to choose. It’s just that you will arrive where you are supposed to arrive eventually, but your choices may help you get there in an easier manner or they may make your journey longer and more difficult, or in the case of Tom Riddle, his complete rejection of what his destiny was not fulfilled because of his choices and complete rejection of the good and of love–things he never understood and always rejected.

You can all jump all over that one, and I can’t really argue the point, but that is my very limited understanding of predestination, and that view, IMO, seems to work well with Deathly Hallows and what Rowling does with the story.

Just as an aside, our Associate Pastor has been doing a sermon series on the Sermon on the Mount, and every week I’ve been thinking of how much it relates to things in the first six books. Now with the seventh one out, it’s incredible that anyone would say that Rowling’s books are not Christian. Maybe that’s what’s bothering some people. I’m sure it will be a problem for some of the people at one small forum I sometimes go where they didn’t like OotP because it was love that was to defeat evil, and they are avowed atheists. (I might stay away from there for quite a while, actually–there will definitely be some unhappy souls there.)

Anyway, today’s sermon was from Matthew 5:38-48, about revenge and how we respond to our enemies. Pastor Neil hasn’t read HP, but his wife does, and he goes to see the movies. But his timing couldn’t be better.

Pat (who really needs some sleep)

72 Kambria McLeanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 9:54 am

I’m just wondering…

When Harry was captured by the Death Eaters, including Fenrir, they mentioned that Dudley was working for the Ministry of Magic (which coincided with Harry’s story of his identity). Could it be that this was the person using magic late in life? That is, it seems unlikely to me that someone would be able to work at the MoM without being able to use magic themselves. It would be great irony if Dudley, the adored son, were able to use magic as well. (Reference is in ch. 23, p. 450 of the US hardcover).

73 Mrs. WeasleyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:24 am

Kambria, that “Dudley” in the MoM was a last name, not a first one, I believe. Harry gave his name as “Vernon Dudley.”

But while we’re on the subject of the Dursleys, and since this is a post on initial reactions, I had some regarding the Dursleys. Where were they taken? What happened to them? It would have been nice to know, in the end, since Dudley and Petunia were Harry’s only living relatives.

And, I still wonder at Dudley’s reaction to the dementors, and vice versa, since Muggles aren’t supposed to see them (or feel their effects, except for despair), and I don’t believe dementors would suck out the soul of Muggles.

And one last, unrelated comment – I sure hope that one of the Weasley kids named one of their children after Fred, since neither Ginny nor Ron did.

74 KambriaNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:35 am

Mrs. Weasley,

Actually, that’s not quite correct. Here’s the quote:

“‘He works at the Ministry,’ Harry lied [...] ‘Department of Magical Accidents and Catastrophes.’”

“‘You know what, Greyback,’ said Scabior. ‘I think there *is* a Dudley in there.’”

It seems to me fairly conclusive that Dudley ends up doing magic.

75 PaxNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:40 am

Perhaps Harry using the unforgivable curses (which, as was pointed out earlier are “legally” unforgivable by the ministry) also serves to remind us who the ultimate decider of what’s unforgivable actually is.

I know as a Christian it is sometimes hard to come to grips with the idea that we are really & completely forgiven.

One of the most poignant scenes for me in the book was the chapter about the Dursleys leaving…that was the first place I cried. Dudley reached a level where he able to think independently….how wonderful!

76 seriously_blackNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:43 am

I’d like to give folks here the satisfaction of hearing me acknowledge that I was wrong about Rowling’s intentions on a number essentials.

Snape was indeed shown to be resoundingly good – so good in fact that Harry names one of his children after him. Apparently “I did it all for love” pardons all wrongs after all (shades of Meatloaf). Moreover “stoppered death” was pivotal as many here had theorized.

Yet again, Harry was wrong about many things and thrashed around in the dark for much of the plot, succeeding more through dumb luck than skill or virtue. I thought Harry was going to be shown to be a bit less of a duffer after all, but I was wrong about that too.

Moreover, Harry was indeed a Horcrux, which required that he die and return from death, whereas I thought Harry would live, but I did not expect a return from death (I thought the *finality* of death was a supposed to be central… oh well).

Contrary to my expectations, Dumbledore was revealed to have been cynically manipulative, playing roulette with the lives of others to salve his own conscience. In doing so he stripped them of choices that were rightfully theirs. Eg Harry had a right (IMO) to decide for himself whether to still go after Horcruxes even though to finish the job he would have to offer himself up to be killed. But he didn’t get that choice because he was deceived and manipulated with half-truths. Dumbledore as puppet master (and Harry and others as puppets) did not sit well with me

Overall, the closing chapters read rather like a compendium of all the most popular theories advanced on the major fan sites. In that sense there were few surprises apart from the two entirely new threads that ran through the story – the family background of Albus Dumbledore (including his relationship with old buddy Grindelwald) and the Deathly Hallows thread. Curiously, despite the efforts to tie these threads in at various points they both seemed somewhat ancillary to the plot and the insights imparted by the story – ie you could omit both yet still have the story resolve and make sense.

In addition to some of the internal contradictions mentioned by others, it seemed to me that the myth of the Elder Wand was flawed. Its repute rests on the fact that it is supposedly unbeatable. Because of this it’s said to have had a long and bloody history, having repeatedly being *claimed* from a previous owner by murder. But those two facts are incompatible – if it’s on record as having been claimed by murder repeatedly throughout history, its hard to imagine anyone believing it “unbeatable”.

I also found it odd that various details in book 7 appear to contradict things Rowling has said in interviews. Eg as Felicity commented, in 2005 JKR said Grindelwald was dead, but in fact he was alive until Voldemort killed him during book 7. Similarly, in the same interview, she said that Harry’s ancestry was unimportant – yet as it turns out, Harry’s direct descendancy from Ignotus Peverell was offered as a crucial plot point, making him heir to one of the Hallows. Moreover the same connection presumably makes Harry a blood relative of Voldemort’s, since I the Peverell ring was an heirloom of the Gaunts, yet JKR had indicated that Harry and Voldemort are not related. I confess that these and various other apparent anomalies like them lead me to wonder if the book 7 we got was not quite the book 7 Rowling had originally envisaged.

77 DaveNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:52 am

That definitly took a long time to read all of those comments, but I am so glad I did becasue these are exactly the things that have been running through my mind since I finished reading.

Where to begin:

First, how amazing was the plot of the three brothers and the deathly hallows. I dont think any one even came close to thinking about that story line, though we did know that the cloak was much more important then initally thought. I agree that it can be a reference to the three temptations of christ, but I see it more as a reference to the fables and greek mythology we grow up with as children. I know at least in my own experince that in almost every story I heard or read, though Im blanking on specifics, that the one who is unafraid to die will always hold the most power. But however you disect it I truly enjoyed learning that new history of the magical world. Though in this I wonder, we know Harry was a decendent of the Peverells, but does that mean he was the heir of gryffindor too? I know this was purly speculation on the fans part on whether there would be one or not, but I was hoping Jo might make that more meaningful.

Second, I can understand how all of you feel about Harry using the cruciatus curse, but we have seen it before when Harry used it again Bellatrix in the Ministry of Magic at the end of Order of the Pheonix. A constant them through out the books that I found was that Harry had to learn to control his emotions, especially in times of heightened stress and importance, as shown in his conversation with Neville before taking his “walk to the cross” explaining about Nagini. The point was that in all his rage and all his emotion, he never did truly cross the line into evil, his heart always remained pure, though stricken with grief.

Third, I definitly agree that alot of the plot holes that were found seem to stem mainly from Jo herself, and not so much the books. Though I think we will find that if Jo need give an answer to who used magic late in life I think we will find it was Filch in the Battle of Hogwarts. Although I must say that I thought there would be some importance to Fawkes, though there was little to no metion of him.

Fourth, I agree that I still cant figure out what the front cover of the book is reference too. My first initial thought was Hogwarts as well, in the final due between Harry and Voldemort. But if you read the book carefully, it says when Harry disarmed Voldemort that he was still holding Draco’s wand, and that then when he caught Voldemorts that he had 2, so it cant be that scene because he doesnt have anything in his hand. My second thought was in the forbidden forest where Harry sacrificed himself, but again Voldemort is not holding the Elder Wand, so it cant be that either. As far as I know the only other time Voldemort and Harry were face to face was in the begining of the book when Harry was escaping with Hagrid to the Tonks house. (By the way, how much did everyone expect Hagrid to be dead there?? I was so ready for the blow I was almost angry when he was alive!)

Finally, though Im sure there will be plenty more to come, I must say that I truly loved this book. There were some points that bothered me, such as the coincidental happenstances that so convieniently occured, but overall they did not distract from the story at all. I know I personally was starting to feel just as fustrated as the trio when they were sitting in the woods, with locket, with no idea how to destroy it or what to do next, Jo definitly made me feel there annoyance, though I dont think that is the right word to describe it. Oh, and when Ron and Hermione finally started going at it before searching for the diadam, i dont know about you guys but I screamed FINALLY!! to myself, which unfortunatly woke up my entire house at 4 in the morning. In the end though I am extremely happy that she let Harry have his happy ending. In book six I was so heart broken when he told Ginny that he couldnt be with her that I was praying that Jo would allow them to be together in the end, whether dead or alive, though alive was prefereable. After losing so many people that he cared about and after 7 years of fighting someone that made his life completely miserable it was amazing, and most definitly made me cry, to see him 19 years later married to the girl he loved, and who loved him since age 10!! and with 3 children. And I forget who said it about but seeing the childrens names just made the scene even more emotional, espeically Albus Severus. And the speech Harry gave his son about how being sorted into Slytherin would be an honor becasue Severus was one of the bravest people he knew just made me loose it. Travis, I think I joined you in the weenie department this book. It was a wonderful book, and a perfect ending to a perfect series.

78 BHT MatthewNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:53 am

Kambria, as has been mentioned, Harry gave the fake name “Vernon Dudley”. All Greyback’s comment suggests is that he might remember someone with the last name Dudley working there.

79 anitaNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:55 am

Loved the book but like others, was a bit disappointed at some of the unanswered questions/plot points. With all the build up over Harry’s/Lily’s eyes, just having Snape look into them as he died didn’t seem to me to be a great resolution to that “crucial” question. I also wished we learned more about the James and Lily backstory and how they thrice defeated Voldemort. Trevor the Toad was a complete red herring. And if Harry is a descendent of the Peveralls, wouldn’t that make him related to Voldemort through the Gaunts?

80 DougNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 11:27 am

s_b, you can’t say fairer than that! You had good arguments for what you believed would happen, but the author chose to go in a different direction.

And like you, I have to wonder whether this is really the book Jo has been envisioning all these years as there is so much that doesn’t match up with her hints and statements.

The one that disappointed me the most was Voldemort’s memory of Godric’s Hollow. Let’s just count the problems here:

- Lily supposedly saved Harry because she had a choice to live and chose to die. But we see nothing of this! Voldemort vaguely intents to spare her, gives her an order, she refuses, he changes his mind and kills her. Was either one aware of a choice being made?

- Voldemort was supposedly intent on making a Horcrux from Harry’s death, but he doesn’t think about horcruxes, he doesn’t seem to be carrying an artifact to become one, and there’s nothing different about his attempt to murder Harry from any of the others.

- Dumbledore has intimate knowledge of what happened that night. The order of the deaths. Voldemort’s motives. Lily’s salvation of Harry. The making of an accidental Horcrux. But there was no third party to witness events and tell Albus these things.

- The house was visible to Muggle Authorities, as Hagrid says they were swarming around. But it can’t have taken very long for them to get there after the “explosion”. There’s no explanation of how Dumbledore learned so quickly of Harry’s survival, nor why it then took almost a full day to transport Harry to southern England.

So what, pray tell, was so important in this scene that she needed to conceal it from us for 6.5 books? I mean, it basically was Harry’s Dementor flashbacks from Book 3 told from a different point of view. There was no new information here. There was no clue for Harry. There was no hint about Snape, Horcruxes, Hallows, Dumbledore, how to survive an AK, or any other issue central to book 7.

And, just speaking personally, I would have been so much happier if Lily really had made a choice – like Harry did after seeing Snape’s memories. Or if Lily had acted in any way different from what any parent would do – when Voldemort murdered the mother at Gregorovich’s old house as she tried to protect her kids, why didn’t those kids survive with scars?

81 ReyhanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:05 pm

I have read the above comments with increasing dismay, anger and disappointment.

So she didn’t tie off all the threads. Were there any important ones she forgot about? So she didn’t include everyone’s backstory. Would it have made any difference to the outcome? So Harry used some nasty curses. Did you think that your view of Harry’s morality was binding to the author? So she didn’t say enough about your favorite characters. It’s her story. So the two new(ish) plot threads she introduced into the story were neither central nor completely realized. Did they take away from the central message of the story?

JKR does rely too much on coincidence. That’s not new, is it? You’ve read six of her books. You know what kind of writer she is. And in spinning seven volumes, some of the details have gotten mixed up. Sort them out.

Look at the book you have in your hands. Did it speak to you? What did it say? Did it move you? Are you sorry that the tale is told and there is no more?

I know this post is called “Initial Reactions” and if your initial reaction is to pick holes, then that is your right. But I for one (the only one?) would like a post where people could talk more about what was done well and less about how the book did not meet their expectations.

And S_B, your comment gives me no satisfaction whatsoever.

82 dlNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:12 pm

my initial reaction to book 7, especially the last few chapters, was to go back and re-read them over and over again to make sure I understood how jkr was trying to tie everything up!

shadow over at book of shadow has some good points about magic, love and death in book 7. the post can be found here:
http://thebookofshadow.blogspot.com/2007/07/harry-potter-and-deathly-hallows.html

but i think there is a lot more to think about. with the first few books, i thought that we were reading too much into the harry potter series. but with the last book, i now think jkr’s definitely no airhead!

83 BoggartNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:30 pm

I dunno the whole book was a bit of a dissapointment. It didnt seem like ROwling.

I think she herself had built up way too many secrets and special connections over the years, that she finally figured out that she wasn’t able to close them all in one book and gave it up as a bad job(because i thought the beggining was quite good.)

In short I think she created something bigger than herslf when she gave birth to Harry Potter.

84 Mrs. WeasleyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:33 pm

Reyhan, please don’t be so disappointed in folks here. At least 90% have said they really, really like the book, and many have said exactly why. I think it’s natural that people like us, who have waited and discussed and theorized and puzzled for so long, will have questions immediately afterwards. And of course she couldn’t answer everything, but there were some things we would have really loved to know. And of course, it’s her choice whether to tell us or not – it’s ALL her choice.

And I don’t think there’s any Harry fan anywhere who is glad it’s over.

There’ll be lots more to say when Travis puts up additional posts, going more into detail. But for now, I think it’s okay if people ask questions – and one of Travis’ headings above is unanswered questions, so it’s not out of place here.

I understand where you’re coming from, I really do, but I know in my case anyway, the joy of finally being able to read the last book is mingled with the sadness of its being the last book, so I think this is what you’re seeing in the comments. Be patient; we’ll get where you are!

85 DougNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 12:45 pm

Reyhan, I don’t want to give the impression that I disliked the book. For me, it maybe scored about a 2.5 out of 5. The disappointment with the problems slightly outweighed the joy at the successes.

But there definitely were some successess. Some of them, in book were:

- Kreacher’s transformation, and the way in which Herminone got Harry and Ron to acknowledge the injustice of the slavery problem.

- Dobby’s death. What a noble character, and what a beautiful end for him.

- The ministry. I am so glad to see that Jo did not just make up the horrific and corrupt MoM of Books 1-6 as some kind of joke. She knew exactly what a monstrous thing it was, and how easy it would be for Voldemort to take it over entirely.

- “Deconstructing Dumbledore” and the conversation with Aberforth. That plot line was beautifully handled.

- Harry’s walk to the cross.

So yes, a lot of beautiful moments that I am glad to have read. But also a fair amount of problems in how this volume connects to the 6 that came before it. And some real disappointment on my part in how some characters/plotlines were handled.

86 PaxNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 1:56 pm

JKR at one time said she’d probably be doing an encyclopedia-style book on Harry Potter’s world someday (and, if I remember right, plans to donate the proceeds to charity). I think for those of us who keenly feel the need to have her tie up some of the “loose ends”, it might be time to write her & let her know what questions we’d like answered the most…

87 SeamusNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 1:59 pm

Does anyone know if Rowling had family members killed in the war? I thought that Nazi imagery (pure bloods and mudbloods, the rounding up of half-bloods, kangaroo courts, families fleeing the country) was some of the most visceral and descrpitive writing of the series.

88 PaxNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:01 pm

By the way, I would have loved to have seen a mention of Snape’s portrait in the Headmaster’s office, but Harry naming his son after him, sort of covers that aspect of things, I guess…

89 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:08 pm

Quick response, more later:

I think Pax is correct: I think she decided on the Encyclopedia when she realized how many small details she’d never be able to provide answers to. I’m looking forward to that volume, should she choose to do it!

90 ReyhanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:22 pm

Seamus, I agree, that sub-plot was very vividly depicted. I was thinking, as I read, of how quickly things can change, and how bureaucracies can make the most irrational of policies seem routine and unquestionable. And yes, it did remind me of the Nazis and how they treated the Jews, gypsies, homosexuals, and any other group they considered unacceptable.

91 DaveNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:44 pm

Id still like to hear some thoughts on what the picture on the front of the book is referencing. My post # 78 explains my confusion

92 DougNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:58 pm

Dave, I believe it depicts the moment just after Harry expells Voldemort’s wand. It’s in the Great Hall at Hogwarts. The sun has just come up, which is depicted in the enchanted ceiling. Harry is reaching upwards to catch Voldemort’s wand. Voldemort is falling backwards, dead. The shadows are the many people watching the duel.

The only inconsistency I see with the text is that Harry should be holding Draco’s wand in his right (wand) hand. Perhaps that’s a detail that changed in the editing process, or perhaps the artist just simply omitted it.

93 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 2:58 pm

I have to freely admit exasperation with some of the negative response. I predicted long ago that our own expectations for this book – and our own theories – would get in the way of our enjoyment. Those who were able to hold loosely to their theories enjoyed the book well. Many of the complaints about what Rowling should have told us come from where we think the story should have gone.

I think it is fair to say that many of the missing details and “contradictions” come from Rowling interviews, not from canon itself. And this is to be expected. After all, the book was outlined, but not finished. It was inevitable that she was going to adjust some plot points over the course of writing the book. So, Grindewald was “dead” in a 2005 interview. He was not dead in canon, and in the process of writing Book 7, she needed him for the plot. So in reality, Grindelwald was never dead, and I’m glad he wasn’t; it was a great part of the plot!

I said it before, and I’ll say it again: we got way too caught up in the small details.

I think answers can be provided for many of the frustrated questions here, but I don’t have time for them now. I do think the plot has its weak points, and there are some rather contrived moments.

But the whole point of the book is the climax and denouement, and it doesn’t get much better than that. Lewis has been skewered for his plot holes. Rowling will be, too. But if you walk away from Narnia not thrilled and exhilerated by Aslan, you’ve missed the point. Same with Rowling! People will ask questions about plot details for years to come, but what Harry did on behalf of the Wizarding World and the victory of sacrificial love over death is just tremendous storytelling.

94 MorgannaNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 3:54 pm

Snno1 wrote: “All in all a disappointing and boring book. Yes, there were some good parts but the weakest by far of the seven books.”

Snnoi, you have a right to your opinion, but if you’re going to throw out such comments you should at least back up your opinions with facts.

Also, I think the thing I objected to most in DH was the term ‘effing’. Maybe that word, or at least it’s obvious abbreviation, is not deemed as nasty in Great Britain as it is in the States, but I had a hard time getting past it. I wanted to wash their mouths out with soap!

95 DaveNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 4:21 pm

Morgana,

I agree to a certain level, I felt it fit with the story in that the characters were older now, and as in real life as people get older their vocabulary expands. This was clearly shown by Molly weasley screaming bitch at Bellatrix after she attacked Ginny.

Everyone,

After continuing to read all these posts through out the day a finality has occured to me that has not yet been mentioned, at least not to my memory.

From the beginning of the Harry Potter series we have known the one true desire of Harry’s heart, a family. And through out the series we have seen how everything close to resembling a family is stripped away from him. In the first book his parents, then Sirius in the 3rd, then Dumbledore in the sixth….his entire life his long lost hope for a family has been dangled in front of him and then ripped away by two simple words, Avada Kedavra.

This is probably why I enjoyed the end of Deathly Hallows so much. Because after his defeat of Voldemort, and the finality of his life long battle, we see the boy who lived 19 years later with that which his heart desired most, a family. He has his wife and his 3 children, each of which carry the memory of those who meant everything to him in the past, his parents and his beloved headmasters. I would not be suprised if James and Lily’s middle names or Ron and Hermiones childrens middle names referenced sirius, fred, and lupin, but it made me happy that in the end we could see Harry with what he has wanted ever since it was ripped away from him so cruely at Godric’s Hollow.

96 TrishNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 4:22 pm

Well, I loved the book, and I have no holes to pick in it. It’s not the book I expected, but it’s exactly what it should be.
Now you can feel free to pick holes in me.

Felicity–
I can explain how Kreacher survived drinking the green potion. The potion itself was not lethal. It created an overwhelming thirst, which could be assuaged only by drinking the water from the lake. But when the lake water was touched, the Inferi attacked, and dragged the drinker to the lake bottom, where he was intended to die.
Kreacher did not die because he, as a house-elf, could do what a wizard could not: disapparate from the cave. And he did so, because Regulus had ordered him to return home.

97 ScottNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 6:13 pm

I have a comment and a question.
On the issue of someone doing magic later in life, I don’t know that I really understand what this is all about. (I don’t spend a lot of time reading all JKR’s interviews). Perhaps it is referring to Molly Weasley. Sure she does magic all the time, but just stuff like cooking and cleaning. She has always played a purely supportive, mothering role for everyone else. Now she finally gets to actually go into battle and do combat magic, which you have never seen her do before. I could be way off on this, but it’s my first impression.
Now the question. When Harry is in King’s Cross, he sees this horrible wailing creature and is told there is absolutely nothing he can do for it. Now, from everything else in that chapter, it seems like this is supposed to be sort of a Purgatory. I don’t know a lot about Purgatory, so I may be getting this wrong. If the wailing creature is supposed to be Voldemort, why would he be in Purgatory? It seems like if there is anyone that would go directly to hell, it would be him. Instead it is almost as if he is just going to be stuck in limbo forever. Is this creature just the remnant of the Harry/horcrux? Perhaps just a vision for Harry of what Voldemort’s soul is like? I dunno.

98 DougNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 6:23 pm

Is this creature just the remnant of the Harry/horcrux? Perhaps just a vision for Harry of what Voldemort’s soul is like? I dunno.

I took it as the piece of Voldemort’s soul that had previously been attached to Harry, i.e. the 7th Horcrux.

I don’t want to venture into theological territory in terms of what Kings Cross represented, but I definitely thought the point was that (a) the fragment of Voldemort’s soul was separate from Harry’s soul in that place, and (b) Harry and Dumbledore appear healed and whole, illustrating the state of their souls, but Voldemort appeared stunted and damaged beyond repair.

99 EeyoreNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 6:38 pm

Trish, thanks for clarifying that one about Kreacher. I never thought that I would like Kreacher, but he was marvelous, and especially that it was he who led the house elves at the battle.

I agree with Reyhan and Travis. I think some are too tied to their own theories of where they thought the story was going. I found the same thing at another forum, where there are many who are “not religious” or are avowed atheists. Surprisingly, they liked the book, and then started nitpicking. So I probably won’t go back there for discussions, even though I’ve been chatting with some of them since 2001. It’s not an argument I care to be in.

Back to the Peverell ring and whether that makes Harry related to Voldemort. I don’t think it does. Gaunt in HBP is proud of the locket which was Slytherin’s and that is his ancestory. But all he says about the ring is that it has been in his family for a long time–that doesn’t mean that he came by it through inheritance. Given what the Gaunts became and what we saw of them, it’s possible that it was stolen from the rightful owners, and that the Gaunts had no idea just what it’s value and importance were?

So, Harry is a descendent of the Peverell line, and rightful heir to the cloak, and possbily to the wand and the Resurrection stone, if there are no other heirs.

Here’s what Marvolo says to Ogden about the ring, HBP, US version, p. 207:

For a moment, Harry thought Gaunt was making an obscene hand gesture, but then realized that he was showing Ogden the ugly, black-stoned ring he was wearing on his middle finger, waving it before Ogden’s eyes.

“See this? See this? Know what it is? Know where it came from? Centuries it’s been in our family, that’s how far back we go, and pure-blood all the way! Know how much I’ve been offered for this, with the Peverell coat of arms engraved on the stone?”

Then he drags Merope over by the locket, and says, HBP, US p. 208:

“Slytherin’s!” yelled Gaunt. “Salazar Slytherin’s! We’re his last living descendants, what do you say to that, eh?”

He never says that his family descended from the Peverell family–just that the ring was from the Peverell family and had been in his family for a long time. He’s so clear about establishing his connection as a rightful heir to Slytherin, that it seems if he were an heir of the Peverell line as well, he would have said so, but he doesn’t. His anscestors were once rich, so they might have purchased it. I tend to think that it’s the sort of thing that might have been stolen, though, given what the Guants were like. Marvolo may not even be aware of how his family came to own it.

I think that particular point is a great example of Jo leading us to make an assumption that misdirects our understanding of what the facts actually are. Brilliant.

And the cover art–I think it has to be in the Great Hall. The windows and walls of the castle were damaged throughout, and the ceiling reflects the outside sky, which at that point was the beginning of dawn. There’s also an explosion when the spells meet. So Harry being wandless does appear to be a choice of the artist rather than something in the story. Odd that she would leave that out, but she’s also had Harry’s wand in the wrong hand several times. I still love the cover, don’t get me wrong, but I’m not going to worry about that particular detail.

Pat

100 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 7:03 pm

Was Stan Shunpike a squib? ‘Cause that would make him, under the Imperius curse, the one to do magic late(r) in life (though he’s still young, of course).

101 EmilyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 7:05 pm

I totally adored this book. I found alot of touching moments throughtout it’s entirety.

I really wish Jo would continue the series, but I guess all good things must come to an end. =[

102 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 8:39 pm

Boggart, hope you don’t mind too much – I’m going to use your questions as a place to start deconstructing some of the disappointment with the book:

Here are your “unresolved plot points” from above:

1.What did Draco have on his arm?
2.Who used magic late in life?
3.What happened to S.P.E.W (just because Dobby died won’t change the whole wizarding worlds mentality)
4.I thought the weasleys flying car would appear
5.Why does Dumbledore have a scar shaped like the London underground
6.Rowling had said that the shape of Harrys scar was important, what happened?
7.Why was it that Sirius had to die?Rowling said we would know.

Here are my answers.

1. I wondered this too, and it’s a valid question. Though we’re not told explicitly, however, Draco is in the Death Eater meeting in chapter one. So he’s a Death Eater. So it was the Dark Mark.

2. I don’t think she answered this, but I don’t think she was required to. I don’t think it’s fair to hold Rowling to anything she said in interviews about stuff we’d find out in Book 7 before actually writing Book 7. It would have been much better had she made it a policy to not say anything at all about Book 7 in interviews. But canon does not demand an answer to this question, so we don’t need one. Rowling will take care of it in an interview, I’m sure.

3. I think it’s fair to say that we saw a LOT of progress on the house-elf story, especially with Kreacher. I think it would have been incredibly insensitive to the complexity of the issue of slavery to have slavery suddenly abolished and resolved in such a short period of time. Things like that don’t change wihtout years and years of hard work, resistance, and social action.

4. This is not an unresolved plot point at all. It’s just something you wanted to see and didn’t. It wasn’t required of the plot at all.

5. This also was not required of the plot. It’s a quirky detail about Dumbledore, and I’m sure Rowling has an interesting reason, but it’s not necessary to the plot.

6. Rowling said the exact opposite. The shape was not important. I do, of course, wonder why the location was important, but perhaps some analysis will get us there.

7. Rowling has explained why Sirius died in interviews.

I think it’s really important to separate out what are really “unresolved plot points” (things the plot needed in order to be complete) and what are the things we wanted to see, but that Rowling didn’t write into it. There’s a big difference between what Rowling needed to write for the story and what things we hoped would appear in the story.

103 maryNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 9:43 pm

I haven’t quite been able to read all the comments, but just chiming in briefly: I found the book dissatisfying. And yes, as you know, I am a Snape fan and defender, so I am sad about his death – but it isn’t just that. I think any alert reader would have understood Severus’s chances of coming out alive were less than 50/50. Something to throw by you – yes, at least it is conclusively proven that Snape is Dumbledore’s man through and through – but I knew that by the end of OOTP. Some Snape fans truly hate his motivation; I”m one of them, though I don’t feel as strongly about it as some. He defied Voldemort, at the risk of his life, for nearly 20 years because he was carrying a torch for a dead woman who was married to someone else – someone he hated, and who hated him? I can understand why fans find this disturbing. Where is the principle here? As Pat has said, this is a young man who *keeps his promises*, at all costs, and who is remarkably brave and faithful in doing what he sees as his duty – and yet he has no moral principles except love for a dead woman who apparently never loved him? This is supposed to be enough? That does bother me a little. And it bothers me a lot that, contrary to what Rowling has said in interviews, it seems Snape was never loved.

Then, as CMWinters of livejournal points out, they just leave his body in the Shrieking Shack to rot. That’s just awful. And you cannot tell me they don’t; that they finally give the poor fellow the respect and honor he deserves, because there is *nothing* in the text to indicate it. Why not? Again, as my livejournaller friend said, what would it have taken to say in a sentence or two that Snape’s body was brought into the hall to rest with the other heros of the battle?

I am also bothered by the ‘good’ side’s casual use of Unforgivable Curses. These are called Unforgivable for a good reason. ALL of them, not just the AK, damage the soul of the caster because, in order to use them, you have to (1) succumb to hate, and (2) dehumanize your victim. ALL of them. Professor Granger makes a convincing case that, far from being the most benign of the curses, “Imperio” is actually the worst, because it denies any possibily of free will on the part of its victim and thus dehumanizes them entirely.

Then, I thought it was a bit shoddy that Harry got to die and come back to life. I thought the whole point about his mother’s eyes was that he was capable of self-sacrificial love, and that it would be required of him. It wasn’t – not really. The boy’s courage and determination to sacrifice himself for his *friends* was sincere – no problems there – but, if death is not to be feared; if the whole message of these books is that a loving acceptance of death brings triumph and life from it, why couldn’t Harry really die? I also very much missed any real reconciliation with Severus, and I really, really wanted to see Harry – who’s been an angry, vindictive kid – show love for *enemies*. There was just a glimpse of that, with Kreacher, but how much more powerful could it have been with Snape?

But I mostly hated the good guys tossing the Unforgivables around, the heavy-handed analogies to Nazism, (though Umbridge was appropriately chilling, as always – but what happened to her? Does anyone know?), the sentimental coda that told me hardly anything I actually wanted to know, and the mechanical, paint-by-numbers feel of the plot. There were several things I loved.

I was basically vindicated about Snape. I was *right* that he was a loving person, that he was Dumbledore’s man, and that he was a hero. I loved the Regulus/Kreacher story (and perhaps that in itself is indication enough that Sirius and the Marauders are not always right.) I loved Dumbledore’s backstory; I really, really loved seeing that he himself had dabbled with serious darkness and made very grave mistakes as a young man – and that it was in an attempt to conquer death. And Harry was a horcrux! Yes! I loved Harry shouting at Lupin about hs cowardice, *and* that it made Lupin straighen up and fly right. And there were other things I anticipated – I wrote out Snape curing Dumbledore in his office, and telling him about the Unbreakable Vow, in a story on my livejournal more than a year ago. Stoppered death is for real, and Dumbledore really did order Snape to kill him. I’d either guessed or agreed with both those things way back in October, 2005.

I was happy Neville and Luna got to shine. That’s about it. so I’d say I’d give the book a C, but I am grieving for poor Snape, who got so little respect even in death. There’s no excuse for that shoddiness, really. Sorry for the length!

104 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:00 pm

mary, glad to see you back :-)

Just out of curiosity: Was Harry’s naming his second son “Albus Severus” and calling Snape “the bravest man I ever knew” not a significant enough honor? I think Rowling said all she needed to say with that simple phrase. I agree, though – a simple sentence about retrieving his body would have been an excellent addition.

I don’t think Snape either hated Lily, nor that Lily hated Snape, though. And I think that his reasons for remaining good underscore, once again, the key principle of the book (and Dumbledore’s reason for trusting him): Dumbledore’s belief that love is the most powerful form of magic.

105 ReyhanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:13 pm

I don’t think anyone actually believes that Snape’s body was left to rot in the Shrieking Shack forever. It’s just that Harry didn’t dig a grave for him with his own hands, like he did for Dobby; he was not grieved over, like Fred, or Tonks or Lupin. He was forgotten in the battle and the subsequent celebration. No one shed a tear for him because no one loved him.

I don’t think JKR is going to hear the end of this one.

106 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:17 pm

Reyhan, I don’t think so either, and it’s too bad. But I think she was prepared for this. “Some people are going to loathe it,” she said.

107 BoggartNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:27 pm

http://hogwartsprofessor.com/

Ok people check out this link that i found, it states exactly what we were waiting for but in some parts, didn’t get.

(this site was Pre-release)

108 BoggartNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:31 pm

Oh and Travis I dont mind you using my questions to start deconstructing. ;)

Maybe unresolved plot points was a faulty title :D

109 ReyhanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:34 pm

Travis, I believe (and I could easily be wrong) that when JKR predicted that some people were going to “loathe” the book, she probably meant the Christian allusions: the sacrifice, King’s Cross (how opportune is that name!), the resurrection and the subsequent triumph over evil.

She was wrong about that. The walk in the wood, the conversation with the dead, the vision of Tom Riddle’s hell, and (to a lesser extent) the final battle, are classic. They’re the best things she’s ever done, and people will recognize that, regardless of their religious affiliation – or lack thereof.

I also believe that she has always underestimated the fascination Snape exerts over her readers, to the extent of exasperation. It’s a wonderful case of a creation developing a life almost independent of the author. I ask myself: how can you get angry over the fact that you didn’t get to attend a fictional character’s funeral? It reminds me of the police officer who drew his gun and started firing when the bad guys on the television show he was watching had cornered the detective hero.

110 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:34 pm

Boggart, you’re a good sport, thanks!

Yeah, I think it best to discuss which things we hoped to see but didn’t, as distinct from actual plot holes, which should also be distinct from things Rowling said in interviews but didn’t answer in Book 7.

111 BoggartNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:36 pm

Oh and Travis I dont mind you using my questions to start deconstructing. ;)

Maybe unresolved plot points was a faulty title :D

Wow travis u commented on the site too. I never noticed.

112 JulieNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:40 pm

Maybe Snape’s mother loved him?

I know a lot of snape fans would have preferred that he be doing the right things for a more ‘right’ reason other than undying love and remorse for Lily. His interest in the Dark Arts was painted by JKR as more than casual, even when he was at Hogwarts. (In a way that section of the Pensieve scene reminded me of the “ghost of christmas past” section of “Christmas Carol,” where Scrooge’s fiance tells him that he has changed so much the relationship has to be broken off, even though he protests that he still loves her.

In the end JKR left us with something a lot more complex than the all-bad Snape, or the secretly good Snape. She left us with someone tortured and complex to the last moment of his life, and the implication to me of the remaining chapters is that it took Harry a while to come round to the idea of him being a good guy after the battle was all over. (Because it’s true, he falls off the radar after his death until the epilogue — he’s not at King’s Cross, he’s not among the shades who assist Harry in his “last walk” — he’s just — gone.)

I wonder if perhaps JKR herself wrote him this way to avoid making him the focal point of the stories, and yank the focus squarely back to Harry? (Because it is undeniable that for a long while, and especially after HP6, many would have argued that Snape was becoming the most interesting character and in real danger of supplanting Harry as a Hero.)

Julie H, chicago

113 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:42 pm

Reyhan, very well said. I noted in a podcast a while ago that Rowling seemed quite taken aback that people liked Snape so much. Orson Scott Card’s analysis of Snape was almost bang on – he’s a character who went from being a necessary plot point to taking on a life of his own, even within the text. This is why it feels like, to many, his very limited role in DH is a disappointment. I still don’t think it is, necessarily; after all, HBP was his book.

One does wonder whether Rowling was even unaware of the role Snape had taken on in the series. In some ways, he was sort of handled as a plot-turner, nothing more in Book 7. I need to do a re-read of “The Prince’s Tale” in order to re-assess. I did start to get the feeling that there are things Rowling wrote about Snape that came, as Card said, from her subconscious – things she was investing into Snape that even she. I think I’ll take this up on a podcast.

But you are correct: the life of Snape outside the series itself, in Fandom, has been completely unbelievable, and in some places, baffling to me.

And I also think you’re correct that she thought people would loathe it because of the blatantly Christian content. You’re also correct that the climax is what will make the series a classic in the end. But I also think it’s possible she thought people would loathe it after stumbling across some of the insanely long “unanswered questions” lists posted on fan sites.

114 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 10:44 pm

Julie, you’re right – I think Snape took over the series to an extent even JKR hadn’t intended, and Book 7 was Rowling’s way of swinging the whole focus of the story back onto the Trio.

115 JohnnyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 11:02 pm

I agree with you Travis and others here. I loved Deathly Hallows. The symbolism she uses in this book is so profound and the Vancouver Sun quotation was fulfilled to the letter. We see Harry Potter reaching out to the outcasts (house elves and goblins) and smuggling muggles out from trials. We see him saving the life of Draco Malfoy. We see him taking the sword out of the water in the forest (Arthurian overtones) and going into the forest to his death. Voldemort serves as the embodiment of evil like a Hitler (taking over the Ministry and imposing regulations and registration and killing of muggles) as well as Lucifer (Dark Ascending reminds me of that verse in Isaiah 14 as well as Voldemort flying). Cross imagery? Like you said Travis, Mad-Eye’s grave, the Sword of Gryffindor that Harry thought was a silver cross, and yes King’s Cross. There is just so much Christian imagery being invoked here.

I found it interesting that after Harry Potter visited his parents grave, he was going to suggest to Hermione to take refuge in the church nearby with the parishioners singing Christmas carols but Hermione interrupted his thoughts.

Also the siver doe is a female stag, a symbol of Christ. And did anyone notice the William Penn quotation? He was a Quaker Christian.

Harry has really transformed alchemically in his reaction to Dudley, Kreacher, Voldemort, Snape. He’s a changed man and he took on the Dark Lord and came out victorious.

I love this novel!!!!!!!!!!!

116 ReyhanNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 11:09 pm

There is an interesting quality about the chapter “The Prince’s Tale” It’s like scenes from a movie which have been cut and spliced together. Of course, watching memories in a Pensieve is a lot like that. But for me there’s a sense of a complete story that we’re only seeing portions of. There is no “complete story” of course, not yet, and likely not ever. But it feels as if there is. That is magic.

And speaking of movies, I think that JKR has started writing more like a scriptwriter, and her novels are becoming more like screenplays. There are several scenes in DH which play like scenes from a movie. People are bound to disagree, but I like the change.

117 JohnnyNo Gravatar July 23, 2007 at 11:13 pm

I forgot to mention that Deathly Hallows probably has more references to church and God than any previous HP novel. Also when Harry went to his death, he was accompanied by his dead parents and others, which reminded me of the dead that went into Jerusalem at Christ’s death and resurrection in Matthew 27. I think this scene and the resurrection scene after the “afterlife” convo with Dumbledrore was probably more profound than the Aslan crucible scene and I love Narnia.

118 BoggartNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 12:35 am

hmmm i posted the same thing twice

119 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 1:09 am

The whole King’s Cross chapter was excellent.
In tone I was put in mind of the Tolkien story- Leaf by Niggle and inside the stable in The Last Battle.

I’d like to encourage everyone to read Leaf by Niggle especially if the King’s Cross chapter was special to them

Matthew

120 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 2:39 am

Seriously_Black,
Good to see you post here again.
you write-
“I’d like to give folks here the satisfaction of hearing me acknowledge that I was wrong about Rowling’s intentions on a number essentials.”

I don’t think anyone here was has been waiting for DH to come out and show you to be wrong. It doesn’t satisfy me to see that you were wrong. Everyone has been shown wrong by this book, at least those who made some speculations. For myself, I cannot imagine people saying “I told you so!”. I really couldn’t care less.

“Snape was indeed shown to be resoundingly good – so good in fact that Harry names one of his children after him. Apparently “I did it all for love” pardons all wrongs after all (shades of Meatloaf). ”

Why the bad grace?

Matthew

121 FelicityNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 2:51 am

Shadowquill and Matthew (Korg)—

I thought it was odd that LV allowed so many teachers to stay on, but he did want wizarding children to be educated, and he probably didn’t have qualified replacements under his thumb (we’ve hardly seen academic brilliance among the DE’s except for Snape) so he needed McGonagall, Flitwick, Sprout, Slughorn, etc.. It also occurred to me that Snape might have convinced LV to allow Hagrid the half-giant to stay not because he was irreplaceable but because Hagrid is arguably the likeliest leaky bucket in the Order (even though I don’t think Snape used him that way, and as Shadowquill pointed out, Snape sent vulnerable students to Hagrid for detention, which protected them since Hagrid wasn’t in the castle where he would be closely watched).

**
Trish-

Thanks for your response, but Dumbledore was clearly going under from the effects of the green potion, and Dumbledore himself told Harry it was a poison, but one that wouldn’t kill him immediately.

122 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 6:05 am

Felicity,
I put my take on the Hogwarts professors in post #14 above.

There seem to be some brilliant witches and wizards who are Death Eaters. Bellatrix could hold her own against 3 others! It funny how we (or at least I) think of Molly as being a dowdy/ frumpy housewife (nothing wrong with that) but is actually an amazing fighting Witch! It’s a good message- Molly could be a auror, it seems, but chooses to raise a family of fun and skilled children. Including Head boys and prefects.

Matthew

123 korg20000bcNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 7:53 am

One of the funniest things in the book was that the ministry workers had to get to work by being flushed down the dunny like turds.

The Ministry has become the sewer of the wizarding world and Thicknesse the biggest stool on the steaming heap.

Matthew

124 shadowquillNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 8:16 am

I think Snape’s relationship with Lily was beautiful and he deserves a little more credit. His devotion to her even after she married James and even 16 years after her death isn’t your run-of-the-mill sappy lost-love tale. I interpreted it as a genuinely beautiful but heartwrenching story of not merely unrequited love but also of a lost friendship. Like with most sturdy relationships, there was a very strong side to his feelings that wasn’t simply “romantic” in the high-school-sweetheart way, from what I observed. He genuinely cared about her feelings. He wasn’t in the relationship simply for what he could get out of it.

Harry corrected Voldemort’s assumption that Snape had merely “desired her”. It wasn’t anything of the sort, and I don’t consider Snape’s love to be less powerful than any other character’s may have been. If this were Remus Lupin we were talking about I’m sure it would be more readily accepted.

125 shadowquillNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 8:18 am

I just felt like clarifying my thoughts on the subject because lots of my friends thought it was an insufficient revelation about Snape.

126 MuggleNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 9:11 am

Well, after reading all the comments…I still LOVED this book. I do agree that I was disappointed that no one named their kids after Fred at first. However, I am assuming that was a privilege left for George.

I have to say that Snape was never a favorite character of mine until this book. Yes, we had heard about the theory of him loving Lily…But the way she wrote it was perfect. The way he mourned her. The banning of the word mudblood from the portraits in his office. After all that was the final nail in the coffin of his relationship with Lily. Always. That said it all. I loved that he got to look into Lily’s eyes as he died. I didn’t think it was creepy at all. I think Lily did love Snape. The fact that she didn’t love him the way he wanted her to doesn’t mean she didn’t love him. I went back and reread the last half of the book just to reread the Snape portions.

127 maryNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 10:58 am

Travis, thanks for the welcome, though I won’t be sticking around. Just a clarification (I think you often have a hard time understanding what I’ve said, but I don’t know why!) I did not say Lily hated Snape and Snape hated Lily! I said Snape hated *James*, who hated him. There is no evidence *in the text* that anyone ever loved Snape, and that includes Lily. He loved her; she did not love him.

And, though I’m sure everyone’s right that Rowling wanted to yank the focus of the books away from Snape back to Harry, for me, she did not succeed.

Of course, I don’t actually believe that Snape’s body was left to rot in the Shack. What I do believe is that it was cruel and disrespectful to the many Snape fans not to mention that he got a funeral. And why was he not in the afterlife scenes? All we would have liked was two or three sentences indicating he got some respect from someone other than Harry. Not tears, not liking – just some respect. Would that have been so hard, given all the fluff Rowling did give us?

There were some wonderful things in these books, even in this one – as I said before. Rowling can write characters her readers find lovable. She is gifted, and this book could have been a classic for the ages. It is not; she fell short because she was rushed and couldn’t be bothered to (1) show some mercy to a character she personally hated, and (2)present a consistent and cohesive morality in her fictional universe. A couple of people on hogpro brought up the Snape/Sidney Carton analogy. It doesn’t work for me, for a couple of reasons. First, Dickens allowed Carton a sacrificial death which actually saved someone else’s life. Rowling refuses to grant Snape that honor. Second, that death actually made the birth of the child named for Carton possible. Again, not so for Snape. I think the naming of the little boy (who, like young Severus, seems like a sweet kid) is meant to show us how good and forgiving *Harry* is. And yes, it was touching, but too little, too late, considering Rowling didn’t even bother to give Snape an afterlife.

128 jubileespooNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 11:10 am

Just a question that I cannot figure out. Maybe someone knows the answer. I cannot figure out who’s child Victoire is in the Epilogue. Just want to know for curiousities sake

129 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 11:32 am

mary, sorry I misunderstood you!

I think Lily loved Snape; just not in that way. Best friends love each other.

I do think it’s a stretch to say that the book failed to be a classic because she failed to show some mercy to Snape. (I also don’t think it’s fair to say she personally hated him). I think generations who did not take part in the long, 10 year development of Severus Snape will not be reacting the same way Big Time Snape Fans are reacting now. When they see that Harry named his son “Albus Severus,” they’ll know the incredibly value of Snape’s sacrifice. The death itself was not a direct, substitional sacrifice, no. But the entirety of his life’s suffering, including his death, was. Without Snape, Voldemort would have remained alive, and Harry woud not have succeeded.

I think there will be room for lots of discussion on whether or not Rowling’s morality was cohesive and consistent.

130 BonaventuraNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 11:37 am

jubileespoo— Fleur and Bill’s daughter, oui?

131 JeffNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 12:04 pm

IMO, the “flayed baby” at the Harry/Dumbledore King’s Cross was William Penn and George Fox’s “that which is of God in every man” by way of Quaker theology. The Society of Friends view is that everyone (yah, Hitler, whomever) has a bit of God in them, and the question is whether we are faithful to that “divine spark” and let it burn so brightly in our actions that it shows forth as a Holy Flame, or we let it wither and dwindle. That’s in keeping with Rowling showing that even Voldemort still has a fragment of humanity, or the divine image within his humanity, that is in-between with Harry, and is the grounding for Harry’s remarkable choice to give even Tom Riddle (“you dare?” he says when called by his proper, human name) a final chance to tend the flayed scrap of what God has placed in him, and is waiting to receive home in whatever condition we have raised that imago dei to fulfill. Riddle rejects even that last gift (see the dwarves in “The Last Battle”), but the offer is made, i suspect in Harry’s mind to that sobbing infant-figure under the benches in King’s Cross.

132 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 12:22 pm

Another thought on the suffering baby:

It was the piece of Voldemort’s soul in Harry that “died” when Voldemort AK’d him.

That’s how Harry was able to say to Riddle, “I’ve seen what you become.” Harry knows the suffering that Voldemort’s soul will go through after death, because he saw a piece of it suffering.

133 TrishNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 2:50 pm

Felicity:
Dumbledore wasn’t going under from just the potion. The curse in his hand was also working on him.
I didn’t say the potion wasn’t poison. It was, just not a deadly poison. It was also meant to weaken the victim to make him easier prey for the inferi.

134 MiaNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 3:37 pm

Travis, thanks for your thoughtful comments. I desperately needed that because the reviews and comments I’ve read in the newspapers have all been very dismissive that far and I don’t think they do the book any justice. I’ve been racing through the book and I guess I’ll have to read it again more carefully before I come to a final conclusion and make up my mind about several issues.

For the most part, I loved the book as well and I believe that Rowling couldn’t possibly meet all the incredibly high expectations, so it’s only natural that some readers would be disappointed.

I loved the way Voldemort outmanoeuvred himself with that wand, the irony of it was just brilliant. I wasn’t so happy with the epilogue, which seemed too much like a fairy tale “and-they-lived-happily-ever-after” ending. But at least we learned that Harry named one of his children after Severus and called him courageous…

135 AlNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 5:49 pm

Did anyone else think of Matthew 2 and Revelation 12 in Bathilda’s house? Christmas is being rung in and suddenly there is a flashback to Voldemort’s first coming to kill Harry at James and Lily’s house. Voldemort, like the dragon and Herod at the first Christmas, seeks to destroy the child who will bring an end to his kingdom. In the resulting attack he and his angels are cast down and loses his power. The child, however, is delivered and is destined to gain the rod that gives power over all others.

136 sev the true heroNo Gravatar July 24, 2007 at 10:53 pm

Very much enjoyed reading these initial reactions and comments.

I have mostly positive feelings about DH and how the story ended.
As a devout fan of Snape from Bk1 to Bk7 (I was confident Dumbledore had put him up to that scene in HBP, and that Snape was equally aware of Harry’s presence there albeit under the Invisibility Cloak) I hoped for more recognition following Snape’s sacrifice for all those years, and due respect shown for his ability to dupe Harry, LV, most members of Hogwarts staff and the OotP. He should have been commended on his multiplicity alone!!!

Just my humble opinion.

Another quick couple of thoughts …

Was it Hagrid who was to use magic later in life? During the Battle of Hogwarts?

Where did Cho end up?

The battle to defeat LV was quite localised. Did the likes of Durmstrang and Beauxbatons not feel the need to help a brother school? Wasn’t this a global struggle against evil? Perhaps Charlie could have brought in a few dragons from Romania and we could have been privy to the 12 uses for Dragon’s blood?

I’m certainly not complaining. As I said, I enjoyed reading DH as it confirmed a few theories, and answered many questions.

Thanks you JKR.

137 Sunner MackNo Gravatar July 25, 2007 at 2:03 am

The good guys using the unforgivable curses didn’t bother me in the slightest. There were some people like Bellatrix that I would just love to cast the curse on. That woman really boiled my blood! Ever since she killed Sirius I have had a strong loathing of her. Way to go Molly! She really put Bella in her place! “NOT MY DAUGHTER YOU B**CH!” Ha ha!

Sometimes I was so enthralled in the book, that I just wanted to jump in the story and cast dozens of “Forgivable” curses. I call them forgivable when you use them in a war.

I hate Bellatrix, but in a way I sort of love her interesting character. I think they picked the perfect actor to play her in the movie. I love Helena Carter.

I am glad Draco lived, he was just pitiful with the way he was born into a Death Eater family. You can tell his parents really love him and I think they were so tied in with Voldemort that there best bet was to stick with him till the end and hope that he would lay mercy upon them until Harry defeated the Dark lord.

I have always liked Draco and Snape the whole time and every time a new book came out I said as long as the trio and my two favorite Slytheren make it, I’ll be happy. I always trusted Dumbledore’s faith in Snape. I just hate that Snape died. That is the only part I really hated about the book. The rest was great. Although there was way too much romance with Ginny for my taste, but I guess it was needed for the Potter family line to continue. I also noticed that things seemed to fall into place to easily but the purse that Hermione had was just hilarious to me! I can’t wait to see Emma Watson with her arm shoulder deep in there. I think it will look funny on the big screen and I think that J.K.R. was going for a little humor in such a war-stricken story.

In our own imagination though I am sure that we are all writing our own endings to the story and rearranging the parts we hated. That is what I like about reading, imagining what you wish had happened. Dumbledore said it better than anyone… Just because it is in your mind, doesn’t mean it isn’t real.

I’ve been working on writing my own story for over ten years now and I only hope I will be satisfied like J.K.R.

And didn’t you just love Peeves little Victory Song? Voldy’s gone Moldy! Didn’t I read a chat somewhere when J.K.R. said something about the fans calling Voldemort Voldy? Maybe that’s where she got the idea.

Anyway… at least my little cousins won’t have to be afraid of saying Voldemort anymore! They even got me saying Who-Know-Who out of habit!

Let it be known that the world can now say Voldemort without looking around nervously! And yes, I am a bit nutty, or “mental” as Ron would say!

138 AJDNo Gravatar July 25, 2007 at 9:35 am

One quick comment re: the question about the importance of S.P.E.W. and it being an unresolved plot point…

Elf rights are what finally got Ron and Hermione to kiss. So that’s pretty important right there.

139 Jorge RyderNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 12:41 pm

What was snape talking about when he said “always” to dumbledore. always what…

140 DaveNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 12:51 pm

In that scene they were talking about Snapes love for Lilly, so when he cast his patronus it is the shape of a doe, which is the same as lilly’s. When dumbledore sees it he says “still?” meaning literally “you still love Lilly?” and Snapes reply was “always”

141 Jorge RyderNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 12:52 pm

Thanks dave

142 Dave the LongwindedNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 3:21 pm

I don’t share Mary’s visceral dislike of the books at all. I love the book, and the majority of it worked very well; some of it worked brilliantly. There are subtleties in Rowling’s writing that are incredibly deft.

But to address a point about “plot holes” and whether disappointments expressed here are a function of our expectations as opposed to requirements of Rowling–

Travis, I disagree with your point that we’re paying too much attention to Rowling’s comments before book 7’s release (and don’t think I’m not laughing my head off at this after our discussions of poststructuralism and authorial intention!). To my mind, Rowling clearly laid some groundrules about the importance of characters and actions in her interviews and these books. In the cases of things like House Unification and Harry’s moral nature, she bent her rules, sometimes rather sharply. But I can accept these as open ended questions designed to invite reader interpretation.

In the cases of the Unforgiveables and Snape’s role, I think she flatly broke those rules. The quote mentioned above by Rowling about Snape’s fan following is telling to me. She’s suprised at how much people “like” Snape, not at how much “importance” people have placed on him. I wouldn’t call myself a Snape “fan” by any stretch of the imagination. He is loathesome in far too many key respects. But the “importance” of Snape is firmly established for 6 3/4 books. He is as demonized as any character in the series for Harry, second only to Voldemort. It’s possible to argue that Harry’s dislike of Snape is more personal than that of Voldemort. And let’s not forget, the end of HBP firmly establishes Snape’s guilt to every character in the books, and it’s not even questioned throughout DH until “The Prince’s Tale”.

What bothers me is that Rowling has shown such deftness for allowing these kinds of plot points — emotional, visceral, thematically significant — to *unfold* so patiently, in some cases over the course of thousands of pages: Harry and Dumbledore’s relationship, Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, and Neville. But “The Prince’s Tale” is so abrupt, and Harry’s emotional transformation so sudden, that I’d think it were written by a different author if I didn’t know better. My initial reaction was that Voldemort’s proffered one hour cease-fire was written in for the sake of tying up this one loose end (why on Earth would Voldemort allow one hour for the Order to regroup, refit, rearm, and possibly reinforce after he’s seized the advantage?).

To me, this is the central flaw in the book. It’s certainly not a killer in that it destroys the central message of the entire series, or even book 7. But it’s certainly much more than simply us worrying about what we wanted to happen as opposed to what Rowling wanted/needed to write.

143 DaveNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 4:14 pm

Fellow Dave,

I agree with you that the revelation of Snapes true character was sudden short lived, to say the least. But when you think about the overall events that were taking place throughout Hallows, how else could it have happened?

Rowling hints that Snape’s character is ultimately good midway through the book durring the scene where Harry finds out that Ginny and Neville were trying to disrupt the school and steal back the sword of gryffindor. In this scene we see that Snape’s punishment to Ginny and them, obvious supporters of Harry and his cause, is to simply go into the Forbidden Forest with Hagrid, something we have seen that really isnt all to dificult and for them might seem fun, as shown in the first few books. When I first read that the first conclusion that I came to was that Snape must be ultimately good. Otherwise he would have made the punishment absolutely brutal leaning more towards the cruelty of the Callows.

So here we see that Rowling is showing the true nature of Snape, but it is also his vital role that he stay neer Voldemort to follow his every action. With this being the case Snape never had a chance to see Harry and pass on the vital information that was given to him by Dumbledore. This is why we see Snape begging Lord Voldemort to let him find Harry durring the battle.

On a side note, but reffering to your comment, the hour break Voldemort gives the Order, in my opinion, is an absolutely brilliant move because it is a direct message to Harry. In that moment he basically gave Harry an ultimatum, come and face me or I will kill everyone that you love. The castle was surrounded and there is no way reinforcements were going to be comming any time in the near future. Anyone who was going to be able to fight was inside that castle, and Voldemort knew that with one final surge he would win. But like he says to Neville after supposedly killing Harry, it is a waste of magical talent and pure blood. So he gives Harry the opportunity to stop letting his friends die, and come to him, which is beneficial on 2 levels. 1: Harry will come alone, meaning its a battle of magical skill where Voldemort is the clear winner, 2: Harry does not get a chance to hide or runaway, or think of some other way to defeat voldemort, in Harrys mind, at this point it is now or never.

But back to Snape, with all these circumstances in place there is no opportunity for Snape to meet with Harry, convince him he is good, tell him what has to happen, and still make Voldemort think he is a loyal death eater. With Harry as the most wanted man in the wizarding world it physically want possible for this revelation to come in any other way then through the Pensive, and as the Order begins to fade in the battle of hogwarts it was clear, at least to me, that something drastic had to happen, and quick, for harry to learn what Snape knew.

Jo’s scene filled this slot nicely and clearly tied up “most” ends that came with that part of the story line. Yes, it was a very sudden and drastic change in the emotional state of Harry, but war has a tendency to have these effects in the real world. Add magic to that and there was no telling what scenario could have happened. Either way I think she did a great job on the novel, especialy towards the end of the book, and I couldnt see her having written it any other way, though I am greatly awaiting the encyclopedia to satisfy my interest in some of the back stories.

144 EdNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 4:52 pm

What’s up with the sword?!

Goblin runs off with it…

…Neville turns up with it in a flash of “deus ex machina” rescue.

How did they recover the sword?

145 Dave, the LongwindedNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 4:57 pm

Ed, yeah…I scratched my head over that one, too. I passed it off as a simple plot goof, though.

146 GainesNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 5:07 pm

Didn’t Neville pull the sword out of the Sorting Hat, just like Harry did in Chamber of Secrets?

147 EdNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 5:08 pm

My best rationalization of it (and I hope that this doesn’t come back to me through the fora as an answer to my own question) is that it wasn’t the true sword at all, though it is clearly identified in the closing chapters as sitting beside Neville.

There was mention of uncertainty from Dumbledore surrounding the unknown ramifications of having a “living” horcrux, i.e. the snake. Perhaps no “darkly” enchanted weapon was necessary to destroy a living horcrux (The “replica” need only have been simply a “random sword”). To lend some credence to the theory, Voldemort would have little need of a protection spell on his pet if the contrary were true.

Have you heard any comment on the note?

148 MiaNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 5:15 pm

Like Gaines wrote, I think Neville drew the sword out of the Sorting Hat. But I haven’t got my copy to look it up.

149 GainesNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 5:18 pm

And it makes sense that Neville could do that. After Harry used the sword to kill the Basilisk, Dumbledore told him that “only a true Gryffindor could have pulled that out of the hat.” In Book 7, Neville has become a “true Gryffindor,” showing courage by leading the DA and resisting the new regime at Hogwarts, as well as receiving a direct charge from Harry to kill the snake. The Sorting Hat responds by conjuring the sword for Neville exactly when he needs it.

150 MiaNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 5:23 pm

Gaines, exactly, that’s how I interpreted the scene. Neville was a true Gryffindor.

151 EdNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 6:02 pm

I’m a moron…just reread it. hmmmf. …must have missed that bit.

Great Book! to all you nay-sayers.

Self-Flattery:

TOTALLY knew…Dumbledore’s plea to Snape in Book 6 was to spare Draco’s innocence and thus Snape was compelled to kill Dumbledore…maybe not a “good-guy”, but certainly in keeping with his persona in the books. We can’t have TOO many reversals can we?

152 EdNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 6:47 pm

Just a ‘brief’ rebuttal to some of the comments above…

Curious it is to me to read so many overtly Christian interpretations of Harry, the Hallows, and King’s Cross above, not to deny their potential veracity (one can only assume JKR had perhaps a MORE Christian upbringing than an average American would understand), the idea that her interpretations could bleed onto the page cannot be debated. I could suppose I would not try, but at any rate, I took things differently…

I took the King’s Cross scene to be simply one of those inexplicable “near death” moments, moments of undeniable clarity, for the “sum” of any series is never known until “that little line is drawn” and one confidently scribbles the total, i.e. the incredible, seemingly “miraculous” revelations contained in the chapter.

Moreover, it is clearly stated throughout the chapter that Harry is not dead at all. This is not “Heaven”, “Hell”, or “Purgatory”. …and Harry is not Jesus.

I disagree with those above who say that a “willingness” to sacrifice is not a “sacrifice”, and that, according to that line of thought, Harry’s “Jesus-ness” is flawed, making for a “bad book”. On the contrary, a “willingness” to sacrifice oneself is paramount. Otherwise, you’re just dead, no martyr here.

The brilliance of the whole series, as has been stated by the author others, and I agree, is that Everyone, EVERYONE, was prepared for the death of our hero. Sorry if he’s not your Jesus and dead for the sin’s of the wizarding world.

We ALL had questions on the nature of the bond between Harry and Voldemort and their ramifications. The reversal was apt and heady (that Voldemort himself had kept Harry alive in the second to last ‘duel’).

Though the sale and printing of the book I’m sure will one day rival it, folks…

…this wasn’t the Bible.

Wasn’t it your lot who had the book(s) banned in countless school libraries?!

153 kateNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 7:16 pm

there are a couple of things that i may have passed over in my excitement of the book, yet i am still confused about.

1. i thought the goblin took the sword in the bank. how did longbottom have it at the end of the book to kill nagini? i thought that ron and hermonie grabbed the basilisk fangs because they had no sword?

2. how did the elder wand choose draco? it was snape that killed dumbeldore so wouldnt the wand be his?

maybe i just overlooked a few things, but i would much appreciate it being cleared up by anyone who has some insight for me!

thanks, kate

154 EdNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 7:21 pm

Would this guy, Ed, EVER shut up?…

Anybody really in the know, really in the circle, PLEASE honor my humble little request…

Film the 6th and 7th years simultaneously, and release them on the heals of one another. Please consider 1) Harry used to grace the screen annually, to everyone’s immense satisfaction. 2) Marketing successes of other franchises, e.g. the Matrix which release the final two chapters in the same calendar year. 3) Uncharacteristically, the substance of Book 7 falls quite in line with the end of Book 6. Although time has clearly past, the transition (Book 7) very quickly returns to the concerns issued at the end of Book 6. It’s like “Starwars (IV)” in its whole as compared to “Empire” and “Return of the Jedi”.

Second request: 7th year (if not 6th as well) should come back to us rated “R”…magnificently poetic when one considers that Hogwart’s wizards come of age at 17. I just don’t see any way to tell the 7th book correctly without the requisite carnage.

OK…seriously…I’m done.

155 EdNo Gravatar July 26, 2007 at 7:35 pm

Kate…

As you can see, I had the same confusion…

I went back and read…the sword, in fact, appeared out of the sorting hat (Chamber), the one random thing that Voldemort decided to summon out of the castle during his bad guy monologue…hmmf.

Draco had “bested” Dumbledore (i.e. “won” the wand), who was distracted, petrifying Harry for his protection in the tower (Book 6). Harry bested Draco at the Malfoy’s.

156 Miss LadybugNo Gravatar July 27, 2007 at 3:23 am

Until the final confrontation with Voldemort, none of the “good guys” but Harry, Ron & Hermione knew Snape was dead, where his body was, and only Harry knew Snape had really been on their side (he was alone with Snape’s memories in the Pensieve). When confronting Voldemort, Harry shares with him (and everyone watching) that Snape was not a loyal Death Eater. Then, after Voldemort is dead, Harry is unable to escape the crush of people who was to get close to him and celebrate the victory over Voldemort and his Death Eaters. When Harry, with Luna’s assistance, does manage to get away, Ron and Hermione go with him. He is then able to tell them about Snape, and then gets the advice he needs from Dumbledore’s portrait about what to do about the Hallows. Since this is where “present day” ends, I imagine that they would then have retrieved Snape’s body, and he along with the others who were lost, would have recieved the honors they earned through their service in the fight against evil incarnate. I’d also imagine that the real story would also get out to the rest of the Wizarding World, through the Lovegoods and The Quibbler, if nothing else. Severus would get the respect he deserved.

And, as others have said, Lily did love Severus, but not in the way he would have wished. They had known each other and been friends for what? Seven years? when the break finally came. Lily wouldn’t have been his friend to begin with if she hadn’t seen good in him.

157 MiaNo Gravatar July 27, 2007 at 4:12 am

Until the final confrontation with Voldemort, none of the “good guys” but Harry, Ron & Hermione knew Snape was dead, where his body was, and only Harry knew Snape had really been on their side (he was alone with Snape’s memories in the Pensieve)

Yes, and after Dumbledore’s death nobody but Snape knew what side Snape really was on. That must have been a tremendous burden.

I really liked how Harry felt safe when the Patronus was around and how it assured the three of them that somebody was on their side.

It was also comforting that Snape looked into Harry’s/ Lily’s eyes in the final moment of his life. I think if he could have made one last wish, this would have been it. It was almost like Harry walking to his death with his loved ones. He wasn’t alone. I found that so much more emotionally satisfying than a description of an honourable funeral.

With few words Rowling pretty much said it all, it was perfectly done.

158 taterliNo Gravatar July 27, 2007 at 6:50 am

About the sword, it is obvious that, being a magical object, it came by itself into the sorting hat when it was needed, just as it had done when harry needed it in the chamber of secrets.

159 taterliNo Gravatar July 27, 2007 at 6:58 am

Hi you folks, I am a christian, but I think all these references to Jesus are a bit exaggerated. This is a fiction novel, not the bible.

160 Travis PrinziNo Gravatar July 27, 2007 at 9:04 am

taterli, right, it’s fiction, not the Bible. But it does use Christian themes, symbolism, and Christ-figures, which is frequently done in fictional literature.

161 patNo Gravatar July 28, 2007 at 12:22 am

Fantastic book and wonderful, thought provoking comments! Thank you all and special thanks to you Travis, for creating the “Sword of Gryffindor.”

Right from the start, Rowling has acknowledged the pain of her mother’s death and how it influenced her writing. Through all the HP books, mothers or surrogates have figured prominently and while I don’t believe Rowling’s overarching theme is the importance of motherly love, she regularly revisits the power or the mother/child relationship. I’m even willing to suggest that Rowling’s characters are shaped for better or worse by the relationship they had with their mother.

On the good relationship side there’s Lilly Potter, Molly Weasley, Professor McGonagall, Kendra Dumbledore even Narcissa Malfoy. All of these mothers and surrogate mothers are strong women, willing to sacrifice themselves for their child. Lilly is obvious and Molly battled Bellatrix to save Ginny. As surrogates to Harry, both Molly and Professor McGonagall repeatedly supported, defended and protected him, as well as fought on his behalf. Even as a Death Eater, Narcissa Malfoy is consumed with worry for Draco, attempting to manipulate people and situations on his behalf and also willing to sacrifice herself for her son. It might even be argued that her love for Draco helps Harry defeat Voldemort. Finally, Kendra Dumbledore’s care, protection and ultimate sacrifice for Ariana helped shape Dumbledore’s character.

On the other hand, both Snape and Tom Riddle had weak, down trodden mothers; Snape growing up in an unhappy home and Tom in an orphanage.

Finally – and this one is a stretch – Rowling starts “The Deathly Hallows” by including several lines from the Greek play, “The Libation Bearer.” In this Greek tragedy, Orestes, son of Agamemnon, returns home to avenge his father’s death at the hands of his mother and her lover. Orestes commits matricide and ultimately goes mad. While the play addresses the bigger issue of revenge, it’s interesting that Rowling chose a play with a self-absorbed mother. (As I said – a stretch.)

Any thoughts?

162 DarylNo Gravatar July 28, 2007 at 1:04 am

Can I say, that according to what happens in the book, Snape is NOT good?

May I point out that all the good that Snape did was explained in the book as his love/obsession with Lily??

May I point out that the motivating factor for going over to the “good” side, for working for the Order, for betraying Voldemort, was because of a selfish love for ONE person?

Unlike Harry, who doesn’t want innocent blood to be spilled, who truly cares about others wellbeing, Snape seems to by doing all of this because of his guilt over the death of his beloved Lily?

What makes a person good? Is it their actions, or their motivation? Does Snape working for the Order make him a “good” guy? I would think not. This “bravery” displayed by him has been displayed by countless real life villains. The dictators, the serial killers, the sadists etc. all have someone who they love, who they would go beyond all bounds in order to protect them. Does this make them good? I think not.

Similarly, I think Snape, like the most evil people, are simply self absorbed. This is the worst evil, those who do not care for others who are not their friends or family. Does Narcissa lying to Voldemort at the end about Harry being dead make her a “good” person? Does this make her brave?

No, it does not. She does what she does for selfish reasons, as does Snape. In my eyes, he is no hero.

163 MiaNo Gravatar July 28, 2007 at 1:47 am

Daryl, true, Snape did it all because he loved Lily. But his love wasn’t selfish, otherwise he wouldn’t have done good for her sake. So it wasn’t just about him but about the person he loved. I believe, what people do matters, even if it’s not for the most noble and altruistic reasons. And I wouldn’t call a person evil who has done good for so many years.

In my opinion, nobody who is “most evil” would have done what he did and not even many of the “good” ones. Of course, he wasn’t as selfless as Harry, but Harry was exceptional. He was better than Snape, even better than Dumbledore, certainly better than myself. He was really special.

164 DarylNo Gravatar July 30, 2007 at 1:52 am

I still think that Snape was NOT a good person. All of the prejudices that he had as a death eater, he never truly changed. Yes, he did good things, but those were only because of the guilt he felt over Lilys death, and NOT because he actually wanted to do good. He was still the old Snape, still just like many of the other Death Eaters, only he had a stronger motivation.

165 reyhanNo Gravatar July 30, 2007 at 8:31 am

So we can at least agree that he did good things, even heroic things.

And someone who does good things, and even heroic things is a – ?

166 AnnieNo Gravatar July 31, 2007 at 10:08 pm

Boggart,

About the person who came to magic late in life. JKR did an online interview the other day (see Mugglenet.com for transcript) and was asked that question. Her answer was along the lines of “Sorry! I changed my mind.”

167 AnnieNo Gravatar July 31, 2007 at 10:19 pm

Doug (post #37)

You said: “All that may be true, but the charge against Albus, both as a teenager and as an adult, was not that he was a bad person. It was that he was tempted by power, and was far too willing to use others to further “the greater good”.

“Harry would have consented, had he known the truth – he really was willing to die to defeat Voldemort. But Albus never bothered to tell him the truth in any of their heart-to-heart chats. Instead that was left as yet one more unpleasant task on Snape’s plate, to be done only at the last possible moment.”

I think the reason Dubledore didn’t tell Harry can be paralleled in Scripture. On the Cross, there is a moment when Christ is in despair and cries out “My God, My God, why hast thou forsaken me.” (or left me in my time of need. I believe God withdrew his spirit and support of Christ in this very trying time so that Christ could make a conscious decision to fulfill his mission to the bitter end. He CHOSE to give up the ghost. I think Harry had to do the same thing. He needed to CHOOSE to sacrifice himself to Lord Thingy without the hope of coming back. This makes his sacrifice complete. It is this willingness to die for others with no thought for himself that seals the protection on the rest of the wizarding world.

168 LaurienNo Gravatar August 11, 2007 at 3:40 pm

hey,

About snape:

I don’t think Lily’s love was the one thing that drove him to heroic actions.
We should interpret his love for lily more like what made him come to his senses.
It’s like: making fun of a someone and afterwards learning that it’s realy a nice person. You don’t stop making fun of people afterwards because you liked the other one and felt sorry for the pain you’ve put them trough, But because you see now that it was wrong. your liking of the person drove you to the conclusion.

Snape did not just desire Lily, he realy cared about her. Unlike LV Snape was able to love, to love deeply and that makes him good to me, to be able to care about another than yourself is not evil or selfish. He stil loved lily while she did not return his love, he wanted her to live hapily with another man and their baby (and not be killed by LV) even when they had not spoken for years and he knew for sure they would not be together. HE cared that she’d be happy.
That doesn’t seems Selfish to me!

And for one thing; JKR makes it clear to me by telling us that you can ‘regrow’ your soul after making a horcrux by feeling remorse, that when you really feel the pain of what you’ve done you can become whole again.

Snape’s love for Lily made him feel (when LV thought the profecy meant Harry and when she was dead) what he was causing other people to feel (by doing evil when he was e DE).
And i’m sure Dumbledore took his time to sit with snape and talk about what he’d done.

You can be sure that snape did not act for the right reasons in the beginning but i would not say that that’s still true during the events of the series.

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170 jonathanNo Gravatar March 15, 2009 at 12:02 pm

1. each one of us wants to end DH our own way. some wants to have a detailed account of what happened to characters – their work, kids, marriage, etc. but as far as the thread or leitmotif of the HP story is concerned, its USUALLY seen from harry’s perspective (except for a few chapters). and the epilogue shows what harry values most, his love for his family.
2. about severus’ love for lily, all i can say is this to those who are dissatisfied: have you ever really loved somebody? if you have, then you would understand snape’s choices.

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