By Matthew
Week 4 of the Sword of Gryffindor Lovecraft Month and we’re discussing the story Pickman’s Model. If you haven’t read any Lovecraft yet and haven’t been part of the discussion this is a good story to get in on it. If you need a brief respite from the Dumbledore declaration you’ll find it here in this story. It is of modest length and is the sort of story Rowling might have written if she had been writing adult fiction about 90 years ago.
Questions-
- This story lacks the idea of “Cosmic” evil that is found in the Cthulhu stories but rather shows us a more personal evil. Is the personal mor frightening than the cosmic?
- Once again we find the story set in a confirmable geographic location and time period with real world personalities mentioned like Cotton Mather. Is this use of a benign, real world masking a deeper evil one an effective literary device in this story?
- What strikes you regarding the disclosure of a horrible evil over a cup of coffee?
- What’s a man to do after the veil has been torn from his eyes?
- Is Pickman a good depiction of a changeling?








{ 14 comments… read them below or add one }
Strange times, Matthew, when we turn to HPL with relief and the expectation of rational although somewhat tepid debate.
I hadn’t thought of Pickman being a changeling – although the inference is clearly there. If anything, I’d thought of his four times-great-grandmother who was hanged for witch, and thought that Pickman might have inherited some of her genes.
No, my real role for Pickman is HPL himself, in his impatience with the effete tea-cosy set of Beacon Hill and his hankering for
‘these ancient places (that) are dreaming gorgeously and over-flowing with wonder and terror and escapes from the commonplace’
Perhaps, however, the two roles are the same, in that HPL saw himself as a changeling, with more in common with the monsters and gods he depicted than with the people around him.
As you see, as always I start with a focus on the author, and not the story.
And thank you, btw, for giving us a break from the exegesis wars.
Well, Matthew, I’ll take a stab at a few of your questions, if only to get away from the Dumbledore is gay threads.:)
Regarding personal evil vs cosmic evil, well, I’d say they’re both pretty scary. I guess if I would have to chose I would pick cosmic as being more frightening.
With a personal evil, there seems to be more of a possibility of combating it. Pickman shoots something in the basement & we don’t know whether it’s a rat as he says or something like the model portrayed. If it’s a beast like the model, that would indicate it could be killed or driven away by mortal means.
Cosmic evil, though, seems to be something that cannot really be fought by mortals. One just sort of hopelessly faces it & those who see too much of it end in either death or insanity.
Anyway, that’s an attempt. I must admit I’ve never been a big Lovecraft reader; just never appealed to me, although I have played Call of Cthulu a few times.
Here are a few thoughts:
1. I don’t find HPL particularly frightening on either the cosmic or the personal level, but I did enjoy the personal level more. The cosmic level is totally unbelievable to me.
2. HPL’s use of the world of Cotton Mather was interesting to me because I have studied that time period in history a fair amount. I, too, have an ancestress who was convicted of witchcraft in Fairfield, CT, during the witch scare; she was pardoned by the state governor, and I am pretty sure I am descended from another woman hanged as a witch in Massachusetts at the same time. Since I have read the details of their trials, the suppositions that HPL makes that Mather is correct in his descriptions of the “satanic” events is simply false to me. I did think of an author I read some years ago-I think it was Chuck Coulson-who really seemed to believe that the Bay colonies were under Satanic attack during Mather’s years. I was quite startled, to say the least, that he would believe such a thing.
3. I like the contrast of the horror being discussed over a coffee klatsch. What is so horrible about dog faces, anyway?
4. If one discovers true evil, one turns from it, as the narrator did.
5. I thought Pickman was a changeling, for the simple reason that if these beings seize human beings and replace them with their own, there must be a lot of these Changelings running about.
I like the way HPL tries to place his weirdness in very normal situations, whether it’s Boston or over coffee. It seems he feels the contrast strengthens the weirdness.
I agree with reyhan that this story seems very self-referential. HPL fancies himself as Pickman. My impression of HPL so far is that he would like this description of Pickman apply to himself: Pickman was in every sense – in conception and in execution – a thorough, painstaking, and almost scientific realist in depicting the weird.
This impression was so strong that I couldn’t really get into the story because I felt I was reading HPL’s philosophy of his art.
And while there was no ‘cosmic’ evil there was the same strong sense of historical, enduring evil as in Rats in the Walls. Having read this story second, I found it derivative of RitW: down into the cellar we go to meet the ancient Evil and see people getting et by mutants.
The only difference, and it’s a good one, is that the narrator knew when to quit! Oh, and it’s comforting to know a revolver can dispatch the nasties. As Arnold once said: ‘If it bleeds, we can kill it.’ I’m not so scared of that kind of personal evil.
Good questions, Matthew. I find the cosmic evil more frightening than the personal, because it’s rooted to a whole system of evil that lies just beneath the surface. If there’s some freaky manifestation of of something weird entirely localized and disconnected from anything else, it’s easier to dismiss.
But, after reading The Call of Cthulhu, having the old “Cthulhu” chants appear suddenly out of nowhere in “The Shadow Over Innsmouth,” when I was entirely not expecting it made me think, “Oh, shoot…Cthulhu is behind everything and can’t be escaped!”
I think Black Angus’ analysis is spot on. It’s a “historical” evil. I’ve got to dig up the Washington Irving quote about ghosts only being in places with lasting histories.
I never thought of the thing in the cellar as being driven off or killed by the revolver.
Just like Frodo crying out “Elbereth” as he attacked the Witch King it was what Pickman was yelling (casting a spell?) that drove it off.
Is it just me or do you think The Goonies would be able to solve this adventure? Maybe they could find one-eyed Willie again?
Matthew
Here is the passage:
‘It came again, and louder. There was a vibration as if the wood had fallen farther than it had fallen before. After that followed a sharp grating noise, a shouted gibberish from Pickman, and the deafening dis-charge of all six chambers of a revolver, fired spectacularly as a lion–tamer might fire in the air for effect. A muffled squeal or squawk, and a thud. Then more wood and brick grating, a pause, and the opening of the door – at which I’ll confess I started violently. Pickman reappeared with his smoking weapon, cursing the bloated rats that infested the ancient well.’
Doesn’t sound like Elbereth to me, Matthew. More like: ‘No, you can’t have a midnight snack. Now unless you take your sorry monster a– back down to the basement by the time I count to three -” BLAM!
I take the “shouted gibberish” to be something more than “Back foul creature! Back to the stygian depths!”
Matthew
Back, foul creature, by the power give to me by the Great Cthulhu, back to the stygian depths!
I mean, given his heritage (witch or changeling) he wouldn’t be calling upon Varda to banish the beast, would he?
I suspect that you were a Robert E. Howard fan in another life.
I completely agree with you. I don’t think he was saying anything holy- just the opposite! But still words of power. It it was the exclamation rather than the shots that did the driving away.
I like RE Howard but haven’t read much more than the Tarzan books – which I love.
Matthew
I’m a little late in joining the HPL readings, so this was my first one. I think one of the main premises of the story is to show that the ordinary is often worse than the extraordinary if you look deeper into it. By disclosing this information over a cup of coffee the author is using a simple ritual and a sense of comfort to unseat the reader with the information about the beasts. Personal is more frightening than cosmic because it is literally in the protagonist’s pocket in the form of a photograph.
As far as using a benign location as an effective literary device, I believe it is effective simply because we’re all a little afraid of the shadows in the basement. If the author’s purpose is to frighten the reader, using the ordinary again to reveal something terrifying.
I also think that Pickman is an excellent representation of a changeling, again bringing back my point of the ordinary. The protagonist goes into the house thinking that Pickman is a normal man, and leaves with a much different opinion. The story drives the point home repeatedly that the ordinary is not what it seems, and can be more horrible than what we fancy to be extraordinary.
I don’t think it was the dog faces that were supposed to be frightening, just the idea that the images looked so real that they were almost breathing–something that even the artist couldn’t possibly imagine; you have to see it to paint it that accurately.
I do agree with Reyhan’s assessment that HPL is representing himself with Pickman’s character. As Pickman does with art, HPL does with literary works–revealing the horrible truths about the world using a creative outlet.
I grew up with the Roy Thomas / Barry Smith Marvel comic book version of Conan the Barbarian (and later, Roy Thomas and John Buscema). Faithful to the original, and art to die for. While Buscema produced a fairly earthy Conan, Smith’s art was pure pre-Raphaelite. Roy Thomas also adapted a few of HPL’s stories for Marvel, including Pickman’s Model, The Music of Erich Zann, and again with Barry Smith: Terrible Old Man.
You should try to get your hands on some of these – although I suspect they might be near-priceless by now.
Nevillegirl’s comment reminded me about the coffee conversation.
I think it is an excellent device for tying the incredible to the mundane, and lending it a touch of reality. We may not easily believe in monsters living in pits, but we all know the smells and rituals of coffee drinking. In fact, I found the whole conversation an excellent way of framing the horror story. Many (most?) of HPL’s stories are told in the first person, but in Pickaman’s tale there is a strong sense of another person present. It was actually very well done.
For those interested, Cthulhu is a regular secondary character in the User Friendly comic strip.
Here’s one of his latest appearances.