By Matthew
The conversation on this story has already started and it’ll be quite worth your while to read this story and share your ideas and thoughts.
When I first read this story, about 15 years ago, it seemed to sit in my subconcious. Since that time I have been reminded of it by other authors’ writings. When I read The Rats in the Walls most recently I was surprised how my mental recollections of it had changed from what the story actually is. Like seeing yourself in your own memories. Does this happen to anyone else?
This story, I feel, has been strongly inspired by the story of Sawney Bean. If you don’t know of it, now is your chance to inform yourself.
Also, when I read Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets I was instantly reminded of the haunting rats in this story. Rats that only the protagonist and his cat are aware of. Only Harry and the spiders are aware of the basilisk.
Some questions:
- Are the rats a product of the protagonist’s imagination?
- What comments are there, if any, on the nature of evil in this story?
- Is grief enough to break someone’s mind?
- Is the protagonist a wererat?
- Do you see the influence of this story in other fiction?








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Good questions, Matthew.
I’ve been thinking about those rats, whether they’re real, or ghost rats, or both and neither, something more interesting than either, a symbol and a signpost to the mystery of the ancient cannibalistic cult.
That they had physical existence at some point, there is no doubt: when the De Poere cult members were killed by their relative in the early 17th century, hordes of ravenous rats escaped from the pits to the countryside, devouring all they found. They also appear to have munched on the people in the pens and this, I think, is corroborated by the learned witnesses who come down into the caverns with the narrator.
That no one except the narrator – and the cats – can see them now is equally certain.
So what are they now?
A lot of evidence suggests that they are spirit guides, sent by the blind mad god who lives at the center of the earth, to bring one of the last surviving de la Poers back to his ancestors’ spiritual beliefs and practices.
The evidence includes the fact that the scurrying – inaudible to all except the narrator (and the cats)- stops when he finds the crack in the wall that leads to the subterranean grotto. This is supported by Thornton’s view that:
“I had now been shown the thing which certain forces had wished to show me.”
Once in the caverns, the narrator speaks of:
” (It was) the eldritch scurrying of those fiend-born rats, always questing for new horrors, and determined to lead me on even unto those grinning caverns of earth’s centre where Nyarlathotep, the mad faceless god, howls blindly in the darkness to the piping of two amorphous idiot flute-players.”
And finally:
“They must know it was the rats; the slithering scurrying rats whose scampering will never let me sleep; the daemon rats that race behind the padding in this room and beckon me down to greater horrors than I have ever known; the rats they can never hear; the rats, the rats in the walls.”
Does calling the rats them spirit guides grant them an existence outside of the protagonist’s imagination? Not necessarily. He could, it’s possible, have imagined them, and that would make for a fascinating story, but I don’t think that was the story HPL meant to tell. The definitive proof, I think, is the behaviour of the cats, especially the unfortunately named “Nigger-Man”. They hear the rats, so there is independent corroboration. The protagonist didn’t imagine the rats, although only he could hear them.
I think that the themes of evil and grief are bound together in this story. The protagonist is not evil – he seems to lead a blameless life, and spends two years caring for his invalid son. The family trait – if wanting to worship dark gods can be called a trait – lies dormant in him. It is called out only when he’s at the entrance to the blind god’s temple, and made possible – that is the implication – by his grief and anger at the losses in his life. And one more thing: the unfairness of life. I liked this progression very much; the “good” de la Poers try to make a blameless life for themselves, putting aside their cult-worship. Yet life – the destruction of their home by the war, the death of a son due to another war – pushes them back to the old way. The last straw, the straw that breaks this camel’s back, is the fact that a Norrys now owns most of the de la Poer lands and, unforgivably, survived the war that killed de la Poer’s son.
This also brings up another fascinating question: did the protagonist have a choice? Could he have walked away from the evil? The narrator of Innsmouth didn’t really have that choice, what he became was bred in the bone. But de la Poere does have a choice.
After the initial discovery of the crack in the wall of the crypt:
“we paused in doubt whether to abandon our search and quit the priory forever in superstitious caution, or to gratify our sense of adventure and brave whatever horrors might await us in the unknown depths.”
I was struck by that. The protagonist doesn’t rush headlong into the dark – that comes later – he stops to consider. And then does the wrong thing, out of a sense of “adventure”.
The second possible point where he can turn back is when they’re in the grotto. He sees the dark carverns beyond:
‘We shall never know what sightless Stygian worlds yawn beyond the little distance we went, for it was decided that such secrets are not good for mankind.’
But he does go on, because he hears a sound. The sound of the rats. The sound draws him not so much physically further into the caves, but back into the past, and the old ways.
Exit poor, plump Norrys.
Thanks Matthew,
Good connection to Sawney Bean’s cannibalistic family.
The nature of evil in this story reminds me of Cthulhu: an ancient evil in the depths that calls humans to itself. It has power that crosses oceans and civilisation and sophistication is no defence. Its power is such that even when humans seek to destroy it, either by physically destroying the place or by trying to destroy the family line, they never destroy the evil itself. In both stories the evil makes those touched by it less-than-human.
I agree with Reyhan that the rats are spirit guides: real to the narrator but unheard by others. That the cats can hear them is a nod to their ability to discern things of a spiritual nature (Lovecraft even tells us as much with the reference to the dog in the ghost story). And while the rats got them into the sub-cellar it was the cat who found the way under the altar. I was going to say that the cat was in league with the faceless god, but I think it was doing its own investigation, gettting to the bottom of the matter. In the end it was trying to stop its master as he munched on Norry.
I loved the narrator’s final descent into madness/evil expressed through language. Excellently done. The primal evil was within him and he not only physically descended into the pit but he descended in time.
And that word ‘plump.’ Beautiful. It’s like Wile E Coyote looking at Road Runner and Road Runner morphs into a baked dinner.
Great stuff Reyhan and Black Angus.
Reyhan, I think your identifying of the protagonist’s gradual succumbing to evil and the old ways is important. Just like in Innsmouth the initial reactions are ones of horror and disgust. But as the dark influence goes to work on the mind and conscience the horror is removed and desire? is awakened. Don’t we see this happen in our own lives?
Black Angus,
I really like your take on the cat doing his own investigating and then trying to stop the descent of his master. My first reactions were that the cat was attacking his master because he had embodied “the rats” and cats are great rat hunters. That’s why I asked the question about the wererat. I like your take more. Mine has been influence by too many fantasy roleplaying games… nerd!
Matthew
Matthew, indeed; the protagonist’s descent into evil in some ways resembles what happens in everyday life.
What is really interesting to me is that de la Poer isn’t initially aware of his feelings about his family’s financial decline, and isn’t actively mourning his dead son; he doesn’t resent Norrys for having survived the war; he seems to have come to terms with these things. His feelings towards Norrys are friendly, and he describes him generally in positive or neutral terms, except for that odd adjective: plump. His emotional state deteriorates as the story progresses, but this is because of the nightmares, which he finds frightful, the fact that only he – and the cats – can hear the rats in the walls, and of course the horrors they uncover in the caves beneath the priory. The two sides of his life only come together – and with such disastrous results – only at the end. The outcome horrifies him as much as anyone else. He puts the responsibility on the rats, which, disturbingly, still continue to “beckon” him “down to greater horrors than I have known”.
Putting aside the device of the mad god who sends his spirit emissaries to draw the protagonist back into his horrible worship, what we are looking at is a good man who does not acknowledge (to us, anyways) his (understandable but socially unacceptable) negative feelings, and who is as shocked as anyone else when, under considerable situational stress, he acts from those feelings. And afterwards denies his actions because they are unacceptable to him – because he is a good man.
Stories that move us touch upon universal themes – loss and anger and destructive action, what could be more universal? My hat is off to Lovecraft for having written a horror story that actually transcends the genre.